on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
17 Aug 2002, 11:50 AM
A rewrite may happen. This thing came out of the madness of last year, which featured: the shittiest job ever, professors made of pure evil and 4 hours of sleep a night and their ensuing hallucinations.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2002, 9:04 AM
We do because A)it's fun. and B) the poem is crap.
on Belongings by Christof
20 Aug 2002, 7:05 AM
That's nice. I like it and I like schnapps.
on Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom
17 Aug 2002, 3:48 PM
this is nice. I like it. Why the copyrights, though?
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 3:59 PM
and slippery. Oh, to feel another man's balls ground against my face..
on Devil, BEWARE!!! by gay
19 Aug 2002, 1:17 PM
New levels of something....not quite sure what the something is. Learn to spell, god damn you!
on In Debt by talking_goldfish
20 Aug 2002, 9:02 AM
pheh. Makes more of an argument against love, really.
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2002, 9:32 AM
the imagery is good, but a bit muddled.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 4:02 PM
mindless. Some high school ditz hits the bottle. (rubs thumbtip to index fingertip) This is the sound of the world's smallest violin playing the world's saddest song just for her.
on Secret, Admirer by <~>
20 Aug 2002, 9:31 AM
I think it's gorgeous. The fact that you used the word "fecund" and used it well puts me in twinkly awe. Final product or not, it's great. Suggestions? ummm, in the first line of the second to last verse, there's a typo. Wish I could help more.
on Few Too Little by talking_goldfish
20 Aug 2002, 9:00 AM
Dumb yanks. I'd say something to the effect of "Don't mind them, they're still mad from when we burned down the white house", but the poem just isn't that great. Still, "dumb yanks".
on some deleted poem
20 Aug 2002, 7:07 AM
This is also nice. Sleepwalking is strange indeed, just ask any of the people who have seen what i do...
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2002, 5:19 PM
Whiny teeny-goth crap with a born-again twist. Every bit as tasty as vomit spiked with leper's piss. Take this pile of cliches and place it somewhere in your anatomy, sir.
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2002, 2:54 PM
As I said before (it mysteriously vanished), this is in no way original. You read it off a bathroom wall, or some such thing. Put up your own work, asshole!
on some deleted poem
19 Aug 2002, 1:14 PM
this isn't original at all. Unless you, that drunk guy in the kilt at the Highland games, that drug dealer on the bus and my strange cousin Tony are all the same person, this is not original work. It's funny though.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 3:53 PM
When i read this, i almost choked on my tea. Sweet merciful McGillicuddy, this has got to be the biggest piece of shit I've ever read. With angel crap too! how precious!Lean over here so I can slap you.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 3:57 PM
but does she have the brains? As usual, there's the crap about charm, smiles and her ability to cause hard-ons, but is there anything behind the grin? prolly not.
on tears beyond hope by Mystifying
17 Aug 2002, 12:46 PM
But what about htose other great words:"alot" (spelled as one word)and the endearment "Baby"? They deserve "laughed till I peed then booted the author in the buttocks" award too. "alls" is fantastic. i sport publik edekashun..
on Earthly Delights? by razorgrin
17 Aug 2002, 12:07 PM
The title came from the poster of the bosch painting that was the first thing I saw every day. I will edit, but now I am mostly working on another fiendish project.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 3:38 PM
pheh. almost a smile, but not quite.