on fear by pitchblackdisaster
16 Aug 2002, 4:43 PM
Cthulhu would be offended.
on devil by pitchblackdisaster
16 Aug 2002, 4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
on good-bye kansas city: meditation #1 by poetandknowit
13 Aug 2002, 10:26 AM
meaningless tripe. There are so many others like this it is not worthy of notice.
on good-bye kansas city: meditation #2 by poetandknowit
12 Aug 2002, 3:22 PM
This is fantastic! I giggle!
on setting the record straight on April by poetandknowit
12 Aug 2002, 3:20 PM
November does suck ass, but I'm rather fond of December.Not a bad poem though.
on devil by pitchblackdisaster
16 Aug 2002, 4:35 PM
I was thinking the same thing, balthazar. That mixed with one of those Chick tracts or something.
on odd star by pitchblackdisaster
16 Aug 2002, 4:42 PM
This is utter shit. Learn to use punctuation, dammit. Also, for your idiotic and cliched use of angel imagery, you should be skinned alive.
on When I Sleep Alone by Jody Conn
15 Aug 2002, 8:46 AM
I'm "sire" he did, Robert.
Darling, your brilliant use of the English language astounds me."Drivel" is a noun, not a verb. What on Earth is your degree in? Business? I'm sure you were at the top of your class at the Sad Redneck Community College, really you were. you said you'd voice your precious little opinion and move on.I'm waiting. You must be very mature for your age- what are you, 19? The object of the site is to discuss poetry as you said (so observant!you get a special short-bus, rubber-undies head-pat!), so why are you doing nothing more than writing your "deep" "hip" little snippets of your dramatic little life and bragging about the fact that you took English in college. English is for useless failed writers. you should have taken some real courses.
Dear sir, seeing as your appreciation of metaphors is sadly limited,you're in little position to remark. As for your 'rewrite" remark, I suggest that you either do several month's work on your own drivel or simply euthanize the pieces of shit you put forth before the good public must view them. Flirting teenagers, eh? You must be a very mature sir to say such things. Your definition of "real poetry" seems to come from a very narrow view: the inside of your tumour-ridden colon. Good day to you.
on Winged Beauty by ThoughtfulSoul
13 Aug 2002, 10:58 AM
Yes, though this needs polishing, it's good deep down. Don't worry about "poetandknowit", he's a pompous, pretentious bastard who seems to have deemed himself the most knowing and mature "poet" on the site, and therefore it's his job to ensure creeping postmodernism and to keep all the comments on topic. He is,in short, a wannabe dictator, poorly endowed and lacking in social skills.
on I know. But I like it. by Shin-Bojangles
13 Aug 2002, 9:26 AM
The White Stripes are TOTALLY sweet.
on The Sea by Tarquin De La Bog
13 Aug 2002, 9:29 AM
But the sea is full of Cthulhu and his minions. And squid. And submarines. The sea is scary.
on some deleted poem
17 Aug 2002, 10:18 AM
utter crap.
on For my darling Lori by Twisted Wizard
16 Aug 2002, 5:10 PM
She's too good for you, you pathetic little man.
on Let's praise the flesh peddler by horus8
14 Aug 2002, 6:02 AM
This is really goddamn good. wow and stuff.
on Strange but true by ==Doylum
15 Aug 2002, 11:21 AM
genius, as always. brightened up an otherwise shitty day.