on IT'S ONLY A JOB by horus8
16 Jul 2002, 5:51 AM
I like this one. The Charon allusion is very nice. Your imagery is great in general, actually.
on Sophisticant by Bluesee
15 Jul 2002, 12:47 PM
"dead-mink grins"= good.
on living room by elmundo
15 Jul 2002, 1:54 PM
blah.
on Sophisticant by Bluesee
15 Jul 2002, 12:47 PM
"dead-mink grins"= good.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 12:59 PM
angst- ridden and dull.
on eat a grape please by skaskowski
15 Jul 2002, 3:44 PM
C'mon horus, give him a little more.It might be funny.
on My Zaftig Sea Nymph by waltfreakinwhitman
15 Jul 2002, 4:14 PM
sure, if i can use my teeth...
on some deleted poem
16 Jul 2002, 5:52 AM
I know a guy who did that once. Said he didn't like it though, and thus did not complete it.
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:11 PM
hooray for lesbians.
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:20 PM
why are you so bitchy to me? we seem to agree on many matters. Why can't we be friends and heckle twisted wizard or something?
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8
15 Jul 2002, 5:22 PM
he started it.
on 11 out of 12 Satisfied by muted_screams
15 Jul 2002, 1:44 PM
voyeurism is the only thing that makes my mall job worthwhile. once a couple got into some heavy petting about 15 feet from me. It went from odd to funny tom creepy and then back to funny. seriously.3.30 in the afternoon, in front of the kiddie rides, these two decided to get freaky.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 2:40 PM
my dear,there is no truth, and when we die, we all go to the same places: dirt, the water table and the air.sorry.
on My Zaftig Sea Nymph by waltfreakinwhitman
15 Jul 2002, 3:29 PM
go look at porn.masturbate more.Write less.
on Bring back the golden calf by rrrr
15 Jul 2002, 3:44 PM
I like it.
on him by akriti_mehta
15 Jul 2002, 12:25 PM
K??dresh and moonhound are right. This is pretty bad.
on moon rants by bluwiz
15 Jul 2002, 12:45 PM
That is fantastic!!!I laughed out loud for an unseemly time.I love it!! The idea of a bitter, jaded moon is great.
on some deleted poem
15 Jul 2002, 1:20 PM
people like that never take mints or gum when you offer either. they should get their breathing licenses revoked.
on Your Smile by ARTIE
15 Jul 2002, 1:54 PM
But I like my everlasting nudity, especially with a pair of knee high boots and a black fedora.
on A Vision of Dark Desire by crims0ngh0st
16 Jul 2002, 5:59 AM
mmm..sexy, but could be a little stronger.very good, all said.