on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 11:42 AM
DIFFERENT, IN A GOOD WAY
on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig
13 Feb 2003, 7:53 AM
Simplistic and beautiful.
on some deleted poem
18 Feb 2003, 11:35 AM
not one of your best but a winsome read all the same .....7
on some deleted poem
26 Mar 2003, 1:48 PM
Killer cool
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 8:45 AM
======BY THE WAY TO TRANSLATE THIS GOTO ...SYSTRANSOFT.COM YOU CAN TRANSLATE ANYTHING FROM FRENCH TO JAPANESE, BUT TO ALL THE CRAP POETS (AND I'M THE PIED PIPER) YOU CANNOT TURN A TURD INTO A GEM.)
LONG LIVE FUNK ROCK !
LONG LIVE FUNK ROCK !
on all in my head by calilegzzz
2 Apr 2003, 8:39 AM
This is a brown sticky nappy. 3
on some deleted poem
2 Apr 2003, 8:43 AM
Ahhh your like a Nurse Gods Wife. I have read some shite today on poemranker, so I thought I would cure myself by a gander and a wander at your pie of tasty words. These pre pubescent bastards who fill this site with poo tire me.
Nurse me sister, nurse me I'm so weary of the zero button.
heres my love in the shape of a 9.
May the lord with his tone deaf choir keep you from them.
Nurse me sister, nurse me I'm so weary of the zero button.
heres my love in the shape of a 9.
May the lord with his tone deaf choir keep you from them.
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
16 Feb 2003, 2:59 AM
Its actually Caducus, Ranger this is quite a mature piece, I love all the lines except the 1000 winds, four winds is ok, try and find out the name for the most desructive wind is, as this is all about destruction. The end line should be simply this...dozens of sympathy cards, but condolences ring hollow.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig
16 Feb 2003, 8:26 AM
wow, wow, wow, ---this is quality man
on some deleted poem
12 Feb 2003, 6:41 AM
you would never know this if i dont say it so i will.
In our writing group you are envied and revered with admiration and respect so keep buying pens and write you are consistent and truly gifted, my brother caducus thinks you are the best on this site, i think your the 2nd after gods wife. ----10
In our writing group you are envied and revered with admiration and respect so keep buying pens and write you are consistent and truly gifted, my brother caducus thinks you are the best on this site, i think your the 2nd after gods wife. ----10
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
7 Mar 2003, 6:29 AM
mad as a hatter
on Weekend at the Taj by <~>
19 Feb 2003, 3:54 AM
travel the world with me Z, with a stopover in the elvis drive through Vegas, I'll pay for the Howard Johnson's and motel6 and you pay for the fuel, I know how to treat rock chix, this is ice ..8
on Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig
21 Feb 2003, 2:37 AM
Profound, just out on the counts on some but otherwise thoughtful and very good ...10
on To Laugh Or Cry by casey
18 Feb 2003, 11:40 AM
BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones
18 Feb 2003, 11:37 AM
oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7
on just as we were by daniella
7 Mar 2003, 6:27 AM
made me think of happy times and booking a holiday 7
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
7 Mar 2003, 3:15 AM
Read this again, and it improves every time