replying on Hunting God by Shardik
4 Jun 2003, 9:21 AM
Is Picasso really dead? I paid a gypsy fifty quid for 'an early work' got a dead goldfish in a plastic bag too.
(where you been Z? )
(where you been Z? )
on Hunting God by Shardik
4 Jun 2003, 9:19 AM
Dont shoot picasso the sound of the gun would screw his other ear up. This has a cult quality to it. Needless to say I diggit 8
on A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig
27 May 2003, 3:45 PM
Obi Wan has taught you well.
Join the dark side (ooooopppppaaaar)
Your still my muse this is so rich in detail
Join the dark side (ooooopppppaaaar)
Your still my muse this is so rich in detail
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
20 May 2003, 11:42 AM
What can I say huh? this is what you do best and its a silky read your a true maestro at this stuff, fuck the haiku stick to freeform this is where your awesome. Aint Cathy a bitch ?
on Symbol Of Love by simone_girard
20 May 2003, 11:39 AM
Listen man, stop reading Barb Cartland get out into the MAtrix and spread your virus elsewhere this is as bad as a blow job from 10 years of marriage.
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on may 18 by Bill Z Bub
20 May 2003, 11:36 AM
I remember reading your poems a long time ago and though they were inspiring you REALLY are the cat in silk pajamas now. I'll keep this real: this rocks
on Damaged By 'Weakness' by Mr Pig
10 Apr 2003, 7:52 AM
Why did you delete my other comment? Anyway only you could have but in my hotel room i found this and thought hmmm I wonder why you posted such a personal poem. I like it a lot because I know you can belt out some real gold and this you have chosen to be frank and honest.
Take care amigo.
Take care amigo.
on Down Lovers Lane by Mr Pig
9 Apr 2003, 2:07 AM
very nice bud, however not as inspirational as the blooding, but still as a concept piece, pretty damn fuckin fine.
on all in my head by calilegzzz
2 Apr 2003, 8:39 AM
This is a brown sticky nappy. 3
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
7 Mar 2003, 6:29 AM
mad as a hatter
on just as we were by daniella
7 Mar 2003, 6:27 AM
made me think of happy times and booking a holiday 7
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
7 Mar 2003, 3:15 AM
Read this again, and it improves every time
on Revelation ( 666 ) by Mr Pig
21 Feb 2003, 2:37 AM
Profound, just out on the counts on some but otherwise thoughtful and very good ...10
on Weekend at the Taj by <~>
19 Feb 2003, 3:54 AM
travel the world with me Z, with a stopover in the elvis drive through Vegas, I'll pay for the Howard Johnson's and motel6 and you pay for the fuel, I know how to treat rock chix, this is ice ..8
on To Laugh Or Cry by casey
18 Feb 2003, 11:40 AM
BETTER THAN THE OTHER ONE, BUT ALAS STILL POO ...4
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
IMMORTALIZE BEAUTY IN PERSONNIFYING MORE THAN THE OBVIOUS, DESCRIBE HOW YOU FEEL, LOYAL TO YOUR FEELINGS, NOT THE RHYME STRUCTURE.....
on Say the Word 'Trousers' Without Laughing by Nicholas Jones
18 Feb 2003, 11:37 AM
oh god what have you done, my secrets out ..shit #7
For making me snigger 8 (I refuse to laugh its far too wanky)