replying on Sharks For Libido by scitz
17 Feb 2003, 8:27 AM
I think not.
on Death Of Day ( re-edit) by Mr Pig
16 Feb 2003, 8:26 AM
wow, wow, wow, ---this is quality man
on His Dying Words (2nd draft) by Ranger
16 Feb 2003, 2:59 AM
Its actually Caducus, Ranger this is quite a mature piece, I love all the lines except the 1000 winds, four winds is ok, try and find out the name for the most desructive wind is, as this is all about destruction. The end line should be simply this...dozens of sympathy cards, but condolences ring hollow.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
something like that, but in your words. I'm giving a 9 here and be encouraged this I respect more than your other stuff.
on The Cheetah (dedicated to zzinnia) by Mr Pig
13 Feb 2003, 7:53 AM
Simplistic and beautiful.
on The Blooding by Mr Pig
12 Feb 2003, 2:32 AM
oooooh you foxy fucker, this is 1st class
on Mother Earth by DewDrop
11 Feb 2003, 4:44 AM
does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
on Mother Earth by DewDrop
11 Feb 2003, 4:44 AM
does famring coffee beans for coffee beans make sense though? thats what is bugging me on an otherwise fine piece?
on Love Under Will by Tyriana
6 Feb 2003, 8:40 AM
lots of vivid words in this, its very well written and the 1st yoga reference i've seen in a poem, i'm impressed. -9-
on the price of success by brazen
5 Feb 2003, 10:10 AM
my bro said it all
on Jesus was a necromancer by horus8
23 Jan 2003, 5:32 AM
oH mY gOd !
I thought we were gods toilet he seems to like shitting on us but I do dig this because its so blatantly controversial and your proud of it. The end line could win the war ! 9
I thought we were gods toilet he seems to like shitting on us but I do dig this because its so blatantly controversial and your proud of it. The end line could win the war ! 9
on Jesus rides the comet by Shardik
23 Jan 2003, 5:16 AM
Cant make total sense of it but you seem to know what your going on about. I love its vibe though, quite humorous was that intentional? -8
replying on Sex with a hairy brazilian by scitz
22 Jan 2003, 9:53 AM
Theres nothin like a mouthful of salty brazil nuts to salivate the mouth (she told me).
Everytime I wear my I LOVE BRAZIL T-Shirt it is with pride.
Everytime I wear my I LOVE BRAZIL T-Shirt it is with pride.
on Poemwanker is a bad bitch by Bobjim the II
18 Jan 2003, 2:09 AM
R.
on she was a garden of roses by crin
18 Jan 2003, 2:08 AM
My pre conceptions of this (pre-read) was it would be clice ridden, i was wrong its a wicked piece of poetry, salacious, dramatic and coated verses like candle wax high number? of course =9=
on dark angel is a whore by UAFANTHORPEY
17 Jan 2003, 8:43 AM
shit for brains, your a disgrace to yourself, your mother and poemranker-0
on Cyanide Summer by cleverdevice
17 Jan 2003, 7:07 AM
Cool poem dude
on Theoretical Islamic Math by Bachus
16 Jan 2003, 9:16 AM
Nice to see an intelligent american who speaks without apology for his beliefs, Bush thought yugoslavia was a car skoda made, its only one mans opinion, and one mans opinion is what democracy is about. Its always difficult to vote on these pieces but Bachus carry on taking no prisoners theres too much bullshit in this world this is escapism like it or bike it. ###8