on The Masonic Underling & the 33 degree by horus8
25 Jan 2003, 1:33 PM
"I love you alone." thats great, i like that...6
on Best Friends by Chels85
25 Jan 2003, 1:17 PM
the rhyme scheme seems kind of forced...and then it doesnt match a real rhythm of any kind....4
on The Considerate Lover by Tascobar
25 Jan 2003, 1:21 PM
thats fucked up man
on calendared by cobalt
25 Jan 2003, 1:30 PM
i love the "breathes length into the day" interesting image..6
on some deleted poem
23 Jan 2003, 5:47 PM
wow!! i love how it starts out...and then how it continues...and how it ends...its just a great poem about a great style of music, and it flows so beautifully!...10
on Under a Streetlight in Paris by blurryphotograph
23 Jan 2003, 5:53 PM
you KNOW i love this poem...((even if i hated you id give it a 9)) mwahahahahahaha
on he was scared. by blurryphotograph
23 Jan 2003, 5:57 PM
you know i love this one too...but im giving you a 9 cause i just dont feel like giving it a 10
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 4:30 AM
i like this poem. theres something there...something genius...8
on my journey--or the beginning of... by blurryphotograph
5 Jan 2003, 8:20 AM
i told you i loved this poem. its you, its totally you...and the ending is wonderful...10
on new year's eve by razorgrin
1 Jan 2003, 1:12 PM
yep...thats new years eve...WONDERFUL description...10
on Turn your back by kliq
1 Jan 2003, 1:16 PM
its rhythm is somewhat messed up...makes reading it kind of jerky...4
on some deleted poem
1 Jan 2003, 1:24 PM
interesting...but not quite my idea of a subject for a poem...5
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 7:44 AM
i dont know...i guess its too unemotional for me...im not much of a reader for "landscape poetry"...5
on Found Lost by Carvaceous
31 Dec 2002, 7:45 AM
i love the images, and those last two lines end it perfectly...8
on would i be considered crazy by silvertongueddevil
31 Dec 2002, 7:48 AM
thats a very interesting idea...crazy...but i like it...9
on some deleted poem
31 Dec 2002, 7:41 AM
nice...8
on Life's Unnoticables by apples_tim
25 Jan 2003, 1:18 PM
forseen is one word
on Words by darkhelmet10
27 Dec 2002, 7:41 PM
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