on The primates fate (chrystal ball foot switch) by Bachus
26 Dec 2002, 3:51 PM
8
on Friends Beyond the Storm by loneshadow29
27 Dec 2002, 4:07 PM
lovely poem...8
on Russian Roulette by <~>
27 Dec 2002, 7:12 PM
this is AMAZING....i mean its so....amazing...i love that last stanza...ten all the way
on Circled Numbered Madness by rick
26 Dec 2002, 3:45 PM
powerful, love the "lunatic tic tic," nice touch...7
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
27 Dec 2002, 7:21 PM
5
on Lasting Forever by angel_uy
27 Dec 2002, 7:39 PM
sweet but short...perhaps a little too...6
on Surpass the Dream by darkhelmet10
27 Dec 2002, 7:40 PM
sweet but sappy...not my fave..but thats just my opinion...3
on Deep Inner Pain by razorgrin
27 Dec 2002, 3:45 PM
haha i love this. i sliced a chunk off my thumb with a cheese grater once. evil things, those metal contraptions...9
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 4:13 PM
that is so beautiful...definitely a ten
on joyriding by Bill Z Bub
27 Dec 2002, 3:36 PM
lovely words...10
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 4:08 PM
i love those last two lines...wonderful ending...8
on some deleted poem
27 Dec 2002, 4:10 PM
oh this is lovely...it feels like a beautiful secret youve divulged to the world...love "side to side i raise insanity"...9
on Why Did God Do This To Me? by TripleHGurl
27 Dec 2002, 4:12 PM
seems too short...you're reading and then its like "wait...where did the rest of the poem go?"...5
on Phillip by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Dec 2002, 3:41 PM
i like this....but i cant quite figure out what you're saying...3
on In Loving Memory of Myself by Owner of the Sky
26 Dec 2002, 3:42 PM
haha i like the ending...its wonderful...6
on drum circle by <~>
27 Dec 2002, 7:17 PM
lovely..."cacophony then conceded, condensed, and coalesced
conjoined, as one voice made of many:
warp and weft, naive and deft,
high and low, fast and slow,
on it pulsed, out it flowed" <- great description....8
conjoined, as one voice made of many:
warp and weft, naive and deft,
high and low, fast and slow,
on it pulsed, out it flowed" <- great description....8
on Blinded by Your Kiss by ThoughtfulSoul
26 Dec 2002, 3:32 PM
i like the idea, and i liked how you worded it...but it needs more...the stanzas seem too short to really pack a punch
on On a chill morning by razorgrin
27 Dec 2002, 3:49 PM
9
on A Short Letter by Ranger
27 Dec 2002, 4:11 PM
'for at night these words seem so much coarser'...totally true...9