on Your sacrifice by Crakyamuni
26 Dec 2002, 2:31 PM
dude....that was powerful and intense and true and amazing and a 10
on some deleted poem
26 Dec 2002, 2:38 PM
sad and moving....? marks in odd places though...4
on some deleted poem
26 Dec 2002, 2:29 PM
you got it all!!....definitely a 10
on some deleted poem
24 Dec 2002, 6:08 PM
vulgar and unexpected...but catchy in a sense ((somewhat like eminem (((who i dislike)))))
on The Elephant Olympics by Yardbird
24 Dec 2002, 6:11 PM
hahaha thats really cute, and the rhyme scheme is done quite nicely
on Good Love by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Dec 2002, 2:35 PM
i dont know...somethings missing. theres no rhythm..no flow..and i dont quite see the whole picture...4
on dream dream dream dream dream by nentwined
26 Dec 2002, 2:39 PM
oh man i love this...had to read it a few times to get it all straight, but its wonderful!!...8