on facku by J.B. Manning
18 Oct 2003, 9:14 PM
Ghirardelli totally ruined chocolate for me.
on the truth about poets by New Life Drug
4 Sep 2002, 7:18 PM
interesting...you spelled Poets wrong though towards the end =/
on some deleted poem
21 Sep 2002, 3:08 PM
this was hilarious! I loved the part that goes "have a nice meal / Hope it poisons you" I often have those thoughts about certain individuals...damn bastards.
on Life : Paradox by amateurR
18 Sep 2002, 8:13 PM
"Life: so our own yet so not" That is sooo true. I love that line!
on Work by poetandknowit
5 Sep 2002, 9:13 PM
"the last paycheck
that dwindles more each day
because of the phone service
and support the daughter and
former wife need to get by." I think it's brilliant. It has a great rhythm! Never thought the woes of paying bills could sound so purty. =)
that dwindles more each day
because of the phone service
and support the daughter and
former wife need to get by." I think it's brilliant. It has a great rhythm! Never thought the woes of paying bills could sound so purty. =)
on remember me by Katie
5 Sep 2002, 2:29 PM
I love the line "I'm the Glimpse you caught out of the corner of your eye." I liked the structure of your poem as well, but there were far too many typos and other mechanical errors.
on Tearz of a Thug Misses by tearz_of_a_thug_mami
5 Sep 2002, 2:49 PM
ooh girl this is so ghetto. Keep doin' your thang. Much props! = )
on some deleted poem
7 Jul 2002, 9:00 PM
i am laughing my ass off...this is classic. love it!
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
6 Jul 2002, 10:37 PM
i don't get it....but i like it. Is that wrong?
on Rearview mirrors by horus8
15 Aug 2003, 10:55 AM
"spit shined by my pain"...love it!
on Chuds in the mall by razorgrin
20 Sep 2002, 12:21 AM
LoL!!! I love it!