on Offence by Stephen Robins
10 Feb 2004, 9:14 PM
Yum.
on Belabourin' Jack by middenHeap
2 Jan 2004, 1:07 PM
Reading this made me cup my balls...I enjoyed it
Thanks for the comment. I wanted to capture that feeling of "willing vulnerability," as you put it. It's incredible how much a person can change once they find someone who is right for them. The moment when other people began to notice the glow in my face served as the inspiration to write this.
on The Fire of My Mind by RubyDragonKnight
1 Jan 2004, 10:55 PM
Valium works better.
on Weep In Me by blueyes
29 Dec 2003, 7:22 PM
make sure you weep with a condom on!
on It's lonely at the top by Jeremi B. Handrinos
24 Dec 2003, 11:04 PM
ha! what a dork. Not God, you. -8-
on My friend over there (the Mirror) by reo316
23 Dec 2003, 11:49 PM
I really like how you worded your last two lines. Solid work.
on Little Bird by Blindpoetry
21 Dec 2003, 7:36 PM
Oh, Little Bird
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
I don't want to see you dead
A feathery pile of green and white turd
How I'd miss you shitting on my head
replying on A Rainy Afternoon by dragonfly
15 Dec 2003, 11:45 PM
What a coincidence. I think so too. =P
on Lessons on being a man by thepinkbunnyofdoom
13 Dec 2003, 8:15 PM
"buying your wife another diamond ring." What the hell does she need another one for!? I know diamonds are a girl's best friend but she should be content already with the wedding ring.
on What I really needed by Shardik
12 Dec 2003, 10:10 PM
Nice and simple.
on diamond of love by crwncka1
12 Dec 2003, 10:07 PM
What did I just read?
on Without you by Luv2write
12 Dec 2003, 10:06 PM
I don't think you mention "the light" enough times.
on Let Go by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 3:54 PM
Well this is definitely better than your last piece. I totally know how it feels to want someone so bad even though you are fully aware they could care less. Still, it seems like a rant. Your ellipses is missing a third dot...
on Hurt by PunkyPanda
11 Dec 2003, 3:47 PM
0_o I'm lost. Ok, so you hurt someone and you feel guilty about it. BUT, the sight of them being happy makes you want to die?
on Preserves for the basement (Poe Poetry) by Bachus
11 Dec 2003, 1:46 PM
lmao!
on The Spirit Of Giving by Miggy
11 Dec 2003, 1:39 PM
Bahumbug!