on I wish I had a friend by un_oying
12 Oct 2003, 2:34 PM
it's the truth. america has issues. hell all of the earth has issues.
on some deleted poem
13 Oct 2003, 9:27 PM
Talent, talent. With these simple words, I praise you.8
on Cherry Blossoms (anti-haiku) by middenHeap
11 Jan 2004, 5:56 PM
you'd asked what had been spawned... the answer to that, is everything
on Why...? by muffielouise
9 Nov 2003, 11:52 AM
KUDOS!!! :)
on Sisters of mercy by titan69
8 Jan 2004, 6:29 PM
slightly sadomassochistic not too shabby... I was jeez not another child of nature then I was like yay when I read it... kind of made me laugh
on You're Good by Freethinker1602
8 Jan 2004, 6:34 PM
wow this is an oldie... well compared to how I feel now and that I understand what it is... it's just a deep appreciation.
on Misgivings by Topaz Servias
16 Nov 2003, 7:15 PM
sad.
on free by Freethinker1602
17 Nov 2003, 12:38 AM
I've only written about 4 guys. sure fine... but I've only felt this about one of them
on free by Freethinker1602
17 Nov 2003, 7:38 PM
I wanna scream so loudly I deafen myself
I wanna beat the walls around me till they fall
Iâm not gonna allow myself to be put that low
Not gonna stand for what others put me through
They can judge me and I say fuck that
I am who I am and I donât think I deserve anything less
If you fuck me over I fuck you up
Donât come messinâ with me Iâm too risky
When Iâm done with you, youâll wish youâd followed that bright light at the end of the tunnel
I wanna beat the walls around me till they fall
Iâm not gonna allow myself to be put that low
Not gonna stand for what others put me through
They can judge me and I say fuck that
I am who I am and I donât think I deserve anything less
If you fuck me over I fuck you up
Donât come messinâ with me Iâm too risky
When Iâm done with you, youâll wish youâd followed that bright light at the end of the tunnel
on A "sirius"makeover by The_Third_Isis
29 Nov 2003, 9:16 PM
kudos... seemed to have some sort of meter, almost. good composition and nice work on the structure ... I liked the lip biting kiss comment
on Porn by New Life Drug
19 Jan 2004, 6:44 AM
I don't really understand the title, but hey what ever floats your boat. I think it is well written and exemplifies what it is to struggle with emotion and confusion. well done, 8
on i'm falling for u damnit! by clumseYdaiseY
26 Jan 2004, 8:35 PM
good job. I can empathize.
on thinking while sawin' a few logs by Freethinker1602
2 Feb 2004, 6:34 PM
Smack! Smack! Smack!...Head hitting desk... Smack! Smack, why did I write something so infernal and horrific! Well congrats on finding it fortune cookie and now to hid it again.
on The Stems of Roses by embersandenvelopes
11 Apr 2004, 8:23 PM
one question, why would you be lying under rose stems? I'm not trying to be an ass, I just want to make sure you aren't "having a rough time" and considering something dangerous. Intersting work though even though I have no idea what it's about I give you an 8 I'm on AIM at Impishkat
on some deleted poem
19 May 2004, 2:33 PM
very strange, just htought you need a vote, 7 it entertained me
on Send The Devil... by horus8
30 Nov 2005, 9:57 PM
Hey there... I was just looking around on here for kicks, haven't been around in ages. Just wanted to say that just because my name is Ke-Ke does not mean I am black. I'm a beautiful blonde with blue eyes.
on I want you by nicole081083
1 Apr 2009, 6:15 AM
it's not so terrible, has a good ring when read aloud. gets mundane in the middle and not as good in the end. the beginning is good. don't listen to those jerks. what may help also, right in a code,images. say the person has blue eyes, you could write
"lovely blue jay
you flew away
before you even landed
you left my branches bare
i tried to catch you
but you're too cunning
emptiness makes my heart tare"
just a suggestion helps make the poem reading and writing more fun and interesting.
"lovely blue jay
you flew away
before you even landed
you left my branches bare
i tried to catch you
but you're too cunning
emptiness makes my heart tare"
just a suggestion helps make the poem reading and writing more fun and interesting.
on He who walks behind the rows by Kraven_The_Wanderer
25 May 2009, 6:06 PM
so what is the corn representing? a cult? or am I just ignorant?
on quetzalcoatl by ThePariahDog
25 May 2009, 6:09 PM
one of the better more recent posts, gratz.
on Children in the Storm by thepinkbunnyofdoom
25 May 2009, 6:17 PM
gosh I do love strong symbolism! <3