on some deleted poem
31 Aug 2003, 12:14 PM
What text is that? English lit 101? Convert to what? The government stopped researching alternate fuel sources since the Muslims pants'd 'em.
on So Long for now by thepinkbunnyofdoom
31 Aug 2003, 12:19 PM
Be safe. Be well. Bring the good fight to the wishing well.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2003, 2:20 PM
Great title, blawzay quip. 7
on Evicition notices & hang nails by grendal
12 Sep 2003, 3:44 PM
And eviction. but for your age attempting a vilanelle is brave and noteworthy, congratulations, but you spell for shit.
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 12:13 PM
Golden Que Tip Award.
on some deleted poem
12 Sep 2003, 12:15 PM
This is just lovely. A perfect read.
on Giger cider by grendal
12 Sep 2003, 3:36 PM
You are way ahead of your time. for a fifteen year old, this is a remarkable piece.
on St. Andrews by Nicholas Jones
11 Sep 2003, 1:12 PM
Becoming.
on Sigh to e.e's Springtime by SP REYNOLDS
11 Sep 2003, 2:18 PM
Damn that's fine craftsmanship Seany boy. Guess who's at my house? My mom. Heeky noodly do. Isn't that odd? I'm finding closure. lol
on An Offering to the Deity that is Me by razorgrin
8 Sep 2003, 10:09 PM
Hi, I've missed you. 10.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 7:49 PM
Yes. That's the one I've seen and loved.
on some deleted poem
5 Sep 2003, 7:54 PM
I see you're prepared. Since he will be coming in and out of your ass. Idiot. I would like to kick your fucking teeth in, earnestly, and shit down your gum hole, but you are to stupid to get the gist of who I am, so burn slow and timid with your vacant god.
on some deleted poem
4 Sep 2003, 2:14 AM
Turd in your hat at the front door, get your coat and shovel off fag, nigger, bone between my teeth. in your last life your my bitch and I hated your first name.
on Wit and Eloquence by Lifeboatman
1 Sep 2003, 1:13 PM
See, that's much better.
on A Cacodemon's Sermon: Message to a Eudemon by Y2kSlamPoet
1 Sep 2003, 2:54 PM
A finely crafted poem.
on some deleted poem
1 Sep 2003, 3:02 PM
"Does the desert miss the rain?" Do you like that song? Your title is lame. Your attemmpt alone is crippled, but your sincerity deserves a 6.4. Which is a powerful earthquake in latin American standards.
on True Respect (A Distant Adoration) by abecedarian
31 Aug 2003, 12:29 PM
"Perfume", but you know what? Who cares. this is a really fine example of poetic magic and universal appeal. this is exactly what young, self absorbed poets like bristol line swaft are missing. The spark of mystery and magic and a connection to your audience. 10.
on Loki's Tryst by OneFingerAnswer
31 Aug 2003, 12:32 PM
Sleipner, Odin's horse. I love mythology. Way to go, and you didn't give anything away either. Awesome.
on The Love Poem by William Delacroix
31 Aug 2003, 12:37 PM
It looks like your aeorta is about to blow a bubble. The end's a bit cliched.
on some deleted poem
30 Aug 2003, 1:17 PM
Have no fear! It's impossible to burn down a desert.