on Blind Sight by Nirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 11:38 AM
Much better.
on Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:57 PM
Is amp.
on What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:55 PM
Hilarious, as funny as birdman's hero poem easilly.
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 1:39 PM
A really brave attempt. I could edit this.
on The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz
22 Aug 2003, 4:03 PM
Feeling okay? Today I auditioned in speedos and when I bent over my hernia popped up my hemhoroid popped over and a baby mouse cried.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 11:04 AM
Why? What now?
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 1:28 PM
See this is exactly why Joan of Ark, failed miserably. Thank god I didn't leave my galoshes at home. It got deep in here for a moment. I, however, hope you did not over exsert yourself selecting words with appropriate connotations.
on Enantiodromia by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:53 PM
Bone hiss rocks. Superb poetry.
on Forget it...k? by psikosis
21 Aug 2003, 2:58 PM
Could you talk more about the opening of legs?
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2003, 1:13 PM
Tricky Mother fucker, oh, and crackers.
on Love till you hate by NNirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 1:23 PM
That's tempting my devil fork.
on walk out by NNirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 1:25 PM
I would end at controlling, and work on shaping your structures.
on How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer
21 Aug 2003, 11:20 AM
It was good up to the point where you had to deliver the 'message'. Then it was a yawn.
Here are two facts.
1. A man with three kids never hops out of a toyota,
he slowly slides.
2. A man that dreams of murder? Does not love or stay with a cheating whore. He moves on to his dreams, and better things... Like MURDERING.
Here are two facts.
1. A man with three kids never hops out of a toyota,
he slowly slides.
2. A man that dreams of murder? Does not love or stay with a cheating whore. He moves on to his dreams, and better things... Like MURDERING.
on You and I by Nirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 11:47 AM
Sometimes, I think back on when I lost it all, again, for the 100th time, and I laugh hysterically until I pop out from behind it all, and say "surprise" with a mindset for murder.
Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.
Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.
on some deleted poem
21 Aug 2003, 11:55 AM
"Boys bare flesh is what I obsess" That alone is worth an eight. So are you saying that you are suffering from Pete Townsendnitis of the sphincter or Kunt?
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa
21 Aug 2003, 11:59 AM
You are old, but hey, I'd fuck you.
on some deleted poem
22 Aug 2003, 1:38 PM
GQT awarde. Wow that was really fucking good. When I got to Mothra I was dying, for sure LOMG! 1.
on faulty fate by Nirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 11:30 AM
Sounds like you need to condense this into a fortune cookie and sit on it for another ten weeks.
on super-power by Nirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 11:35 AM
Maybe they read this poem and were stupifed.