on all american machine by nolan
10 Jul 2003, 10:04 AM
Do you always chew your leg off when you're caught in a shoe box?
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2003, 2:15 AM
Now this makes up for the other two.
on Soul Solitude by leviathan
9 Jul 2003, 3:02 PM
Almost.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 9:57 AM
I tried to laugh, but it didn't happen.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 9:59 AM
Well that was a curlin' turd full of corn & rice.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 10:08 AM
How you two suck cock without eating the penis is what amazes me, frankly.
on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr
10 Jul 2003, 10:18 AM
An instant classic.
on some deleted poem
10 Jul 2003, 10:20 AM
Where was it?
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2003, 1:58 AM
Good lord, I fell asleep and filled my belly button full of slobber, what were you saying I fell asleep between a "dafodil" and "clinging" I believe.
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2003, 2:01 AM
That's not a pimple, sir, this is
"I leaf the son to accomp'nie her on days
Ate night, I leave the moon too light up her weigh
I do butt go by chance
Seeking charm in Moment's dense
Too let Grease continue her play-doo-doo
... and leaf me, against her balsalm"
"I leaf the son to accomp'nie her on days
Ate night, I leave the moon too light up her weigh
I do butt go by chance
Seeking charm in Moment's dense
Too let Grease continue her play-doo-doo
... and leaf me, against her balsalm"
on My BPD vs Yours by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 2:03 AM
That was too cool.
on Herne by OneFingerAnswer
9 Jul 2003, 2:35 AM
You have come a long way my friend, and you have earned every moment. GOLDEN QUE TIP awarde, for having more heart than a rapscallion poet deserves. I like how you only put in the commas and allowed your capitalization to accentuate starts and stops, a fine piece, very handsome.
on Cold Spiral by emeraldskies
9 Jul 2003, 2:13 AM
I wanted too let you know, that I didn't think your poetry was totally hopeless earlier, (it is frightfully young and sensitive) but I would be willing to teach you, some will warn you not to trust me (because they will be jealous),and because I am Grendal, I am offering you this opportunity because I went and read a bit about you on your home page and we have some of the same interests. I also would rather see you have a passion for writing and living rather than feeling resentful of who you are or how you percieve the world around you. I found that you were interesting and would be willing to have you as my apprentice.
on Musehearts Swimming Lessons by DreamerSupreme
9 Jul 2003, 12:34 AM
What do you call Sincere Understanding hitting the water head first on the 4th of July?
"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
"Thrown" a poem by Muse heart, a child killing hack.
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2003, 2:02 PM
Lord, you are stoned, I thought I was smoking the goods, but my friend, you are an aqualung. This is your bravest work. I do beieve the list would look more like this. Ah Cadacus, If I didn't mention you I am now you are definitelyin the mid the top fifteen, and there are even some others, quite a few actually that caught my eye. Venus, Ranger and there are some others, I'm sure. You youngsters though eager, have many more bridges to cross, but I'll give you bonus points for being brash, and at least organizing those hallucinations in your mind in a poetic fashion.
1. Christof
2. Poet & knowit
3. Mr. Pig
4. God's wife
5. Z
6. Settle
7. horus8
8. billz
9. Nicholas Jones
10. Dark Angel (if he isn't already up there)
11. Richa
12. Wolf
13. One fingered Answer
14. Skakowski
15. Razorgrin
16. Nentwined
17. Daniella
18. Durt kl
19. the pink bunny
20. the dreamer kid
And those last two are iffy, and the first ten fluctuate by the second, because some are busier than others.
1. Christof
2. Poet & knowit
3. Mr. Pig
4. God's wife
5. Z
6. Settle
7. horus8
8. billz
9. Nicholas Jones
10. Dark Angel (if he isn't already up there)
11. Richa
12. Wolf
13. One fingered Answer
14. Skakowski
15. Razorgrin
16. Nentwined
17. Daniella
18. Durt kl
19. the pink bunny
20. the dreamer kid
And those last two are iffy, and the first ten fluctuate by the second, because some are busier than others.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 12:21 PM
"As Zephyr's that blow on Eden's Muslims" Sometimes, you crack me up.
on SupremeDreamer by King Abdullah I
8 Jul 2003, 12:26 PM
"ermph" That's the souund gay men make in the closet of tranquility.
on some deleted poem
9 Jul 2003, 2:29 AM
Another brilliant work.