on touch of the grass by david
5 Jul 2003, 1:40 PM
GQTIP AWARDE. A fine poem.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 7:14 PM
Gosh.
on Crowning Achievement by MrsGretchen
7 Jul 2003, 12:38 PM
Better.
on the godself within by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 1:24 PM
"I found the sin of oceanic waters as I would drown" Christ, things are grim when even the Oceanic waters are sinning? you sure that's heaven and not just a blue and gold macaw eating a papaya?
on Death on my arm by INTRANSIT
5 Jul 2003, 7:11 PM
Yes!
on vacation by geewhiz1962
7 Jul 2003, 7:26 PM
This is actually funny, now that I think about it.
on some deleted poem
8 Jul 2003, 12:18 PM
Vroom vroom.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
7 Jul 2003, 7:29 PM
Too bad you didn't write it, cuz it's good.I was going to compliment you on improving.
on Things by MrsGretchen
7 Jul 2003, 1:04 PM
Another.
on oh god please help me by crwncka1
7 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
Yes, I often find myself doing the same thing in my closet with a toothbrush in me mums pink knickers.
"But my soul is still trapped inside myself" This line I believe really ups the stakes in life... I must admit. Having our own souls trapped inside our own bodys during our lives? It's preposterous and down right frightening. Especially, when we've become so accustumed to carrying them around under our hats.
"But my soul is still trapped inside myself" This line I believe really ups the stakes in life... I must admit. Having our own souls trapped inside our own bodys during our lives? It's preposterous and down right frightening. Especially, when we've become so accustumed to carrying them around under our hats.
on RHYMEZONE.COM by King Abdullah II
7 Jul 2003, 12:50 PM
Well, than lunch is in you.
on My Ass Bag by King Abdullah I
7 Jul 2003, 12:51 PM
Yep.
on 2838 Denise Dr. Troy, Mi. by Bachus
6 Jul 2003, 5:54 PM
I love making myself laugh.
on Ocular Photoalbum by DreamerSupreme
6 Jul 2003, 5:58 PM
Daddy, oh sweet dear daddy.
on Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}>
5 Jul 2003, 7:07 PM
Margaret, am I a big bad bully pushing people around? You do realize that we are on the internet and that 'the' idea of 'that' has no favtual basis in a realm where the fact of that actually occuring instinctually triggers, (you're physically reacting to an unphysical situation, dramatically if I may add) in you, a need to label it. Unless of course you mean how when a sheep dog barks and the sheep obey? That's just how God made people Margaret don't be racist against my breed of creatures Margaret, for doing my job in thinning out the weak and flawed, it makes you look ridiculous. Since, in this forum of writers you can't physically do something to one another (Or can you) I mentally challenge people by any means possible verbally, passively, mannipulation, 'LIFE's magic', to get them to wake up, or shut up. I am a poet all day everyday Margaret, and I take the job seriously. Why should I have so many user names you ask? I'm sure it wouldn't be to write 5x more than one name would allow right tits and brains? It's because I write like you breathe Margaret... As much as I can. You should move on to playing mom with some newbie more your intellectual package, overnight delivery. Not a veteran of poetic battle Sweettie, You have no idea about any of my work or who I am for Christ sake. You don't even fucking know who you are yet CHILD! Bi-polar or not, 60's, beat, OliverStone, whatever... I write more passionately than you'll ever allow yourself too understand or do. Have fun here at poemranker Margaret and catagorize until you wipe your hands dilligently on the apron of your isolation spinning that ring, spinning those ideas. Just spinning.
on 195.157.153.253 by <~>
5 Jul 2003, 7:10 PM
Funny, that's for sure. You still in Africa?
on SHAME AND THE OLD MANS CANDLE by Garrett S Sexton
5 Jul 2003, 1:16 PM
I bet you never imagined that your subtext would be better than your writing Garret.
on Poetic Soup [revised] by SupremeDreamer
5 Jul 2003, 1:36 PM
I would change "orgasmic" to organic, and lose "for food" Ending it at words.
on some deleted poem
5 Jul 2003, 7:12 PM
Super medicine.
on One Lump Or Two? by OneFingerAnswer
6 Jul 2003, 5:51 PM
Are you missing a stanza purposely?