on Teen Hardcore by Johnnie Baptiste
2 Jul 2003, 10:47 AM
You are SO! imaginitively vague & aloofa. Perhaps try Xraying your scrotum a 1000 times a day for added appeal.
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2003, 10:39 AM
Jumping Jimenys. (with a swede's tongue)
on your great by GAY AS FU*K
1 Jul 2003, 12:26 PM
Curiously humorous.
on he's so good looking by GAY AS FU*K
1 Jul 2003, 12:17 PM
You sound straight to me.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 12:15 PM
I wanted the ended to be stronger because the build up's great, but then, fizzle fizzle nothing.
on Dogma (Free herts) by Moose Farte by <{Baba^Yaga}>
3 Jul 2003, 10:13 PM
Margaret, did you blue six poor Baba out of symbolic feminism, or mysogenistic lesbianism? watch this i'll give myself a zero and weep on your boob.
on Misgivings by Topaz Servias
4 Jul 2003, 11:12 AM
An honorable path. A good poem.
on Fall Of The Heartlands by Mr Pig
4 Jul 2003, 11:19 AM
12,000 but who's counting. An enjoyable read.
on My last ever poemranker transmission by King Abdullah II
3 Jul 2003, 10:30 PM
This reminds me of one of those cards you would give your teacher, when everyone would sign it, remember? When they would be sick, and dying and beeping in a gernie? Well, unfortunately, I unlike those others who have left the heat of the kitchen, am a professional chef. I am prepared to never leave. I have a legacy of poetry to archive & I'm quite happy here in my studies. Carry on people, and know that I was personaly moved be your heart felt testimonials and observations of our under appreciated relationships. You have all touched me deeply. Thank You, and God bless you. And God Bless America.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 12:46 PM
"thte" What's that? A pub in Wales?
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2003, 10:34 AM
I can't, look how fat my ankles are in these heels?!
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2003, 10:42 AM
Certainly, not listening to sigh, anyways or bussing across America.
on some deleted poem
2 Jul 2003, 10:44 AM
"THERE ONCE WAS MAN NAMED GANUS
WHO WAS SHOCKED BY POEMRANKER'S SAMENESS
SO SOME POEMS HE WROTE
AND THE SAMENESS HE SMOTE
BUT IN HIS HASTE HE FORGOT ABOUT THE CRACKUS". LOL
on Standing by the Sea by thepinkbunnyofdoom
1 Jul 2003, 1:20 PM
Why would you put that last paragraph in? Are you so insecure you need to explain yourself explaining yoursef? Good God, it was fine up until that stab at humor.
on some deleted poem
1 Jul 2003, 1:25 PM
I raise the pot by throwing in my :, and a borrowed colon, and call you on it. lol
on Good prevails by DeadtotheWorld
1 Jul 2003, 1:29 PM
Jesus, right when I think your poetry has hit rock fucking moist stinky lightless bottom, you holler out "China or bust", and start digging again. Amazing.
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus
1 Jul 2003, 1:33 PM
This is by far one of your best, I would lose that "people move away" entirely, and end with a period after "things change".