Comments byhorus8, 1181–1200 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 15 Jun 2003, 12:36 PM
Take out the explanation and just capitalize it, and let it stimulate both ideas whether month or person, the end explains it fine. Except take your parenthesied gibberish out.

This piece is by far one of your more accesible poems. I liked it, because it helped my see you better.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 1:06 PM
Pass the liver Lord.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 1:52 PM
Lord, don't let me in. Save yourself from the onslaught of homosexuals, niggers, chinks, and Jews that would inturn ensue. Think of the integrity of heaven Lord. I believe, Lord, I must decline because I love you and the others to much to risk the impurity.
on Sittin Here by psikosis 15 Jun 2003, 1:58 PM
I concure with Richa. It's too loose.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:00 PM
Excuse me Lord, but that's my foot.
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:05 PM
"TAKE COVER JESU!!!! WHEN I DIED THEY WERE RIGHT ON MY TAIL!" <From the scratchings of Saint Germaine 'the charismaticly uncommited' in the book of 'robe' chapter 'terry cloth' footnoot "why my sloth has three toes".>
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:15 PM
YOU?! It can't BE!
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:17 PM
That was fun. Whatta I owe ya?
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:19 PM
IT WASN'T MY FAULT! THE VOICES! I THOUGHT IT WAS YOU! But since you don't have any lips and resemble more of an ff pink amoeba I know now I was wrong, forgive me God *Bang*
*BANG*
on Seven by Dangzter 15 Jun 2003, 2:21 PM
I want a phone call.
on I Offer Me by leviathan 15 Jun 2003, 6:33 PM
Made my ears pop.
on some deleted poem 16 Jun 2003, 1:11 PM
Oxify it.
on some deleted poem 16 Jun 2003, 1:13 PM
When you substituted live for "leave" is when my mailbox exploded.
on Seven by Dangzter 16 Jun 2003, 1:20 PM
Pardon me, but do you have any Grey poupon?
on Wounds never to heal by Freethinker1602 16 Jun 2003, 1:46 PM
I liked it up until my left hand turned into a radioactive porta potty and regurgitated blue curdled turds about my work space.
on The Sadistic Mirth by Freethinker1602 16 Jun 2003, 1:51 PM
The only thing you have in life is an ace homepage. The rest you stole from kids on the short bus.
on Our New Tongue by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:49 PM
This children is Christof, he is poet, where and when you newbies are not, reap it!

This poem, by the way Christ (if I may use diminutives) is just splendid, have an 8, i actually think it deserves a nine, but since you are an exceptional poet. I can't honestly read all of your poems and give them what they deserve, because then, I believe, I would just be knocking myself out of the top fifteen, and since everyone hates me, it would be impossible to recover my standings, forgive me oh dead composer.
on Belongings by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:50 PM
Good god have a Platinum Q-tip awarde, that was simply the best.
on Butcher by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:52 PM
You are unstoppable, you are a master!
on The Hand of God by Christof 16 Jun 2003, 2:54 PM
Snooze button blues. Your symbolism in this piece is definitely beta realm sleep depravation.