Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8	7-Aug-02/5:29 PM
thanks. i really liked that one..i just resented your heightened ability to rub me the wrong way. but that's why we do this. in all honesty i thought it was really "set up" and "pulled off" quickly and compacted enough to read fast and still maintain its insides and resolve.i was just jealous..a touch. do me a favor i wrote a piece for D.A called "plains of africa" let me know how it feels. cuz i did a style twist, and i'm so repulsed with the editing blues, i need fresh input. kick it around later a little..let me know if its worth doing parts 6-12. ciao. i know it's got three typos, so fuck them don't worry i'll get em later. compulsive bastard blues going out to all of you. Thanx razorae
Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8	7-Aug-02/5:09 PM
my golden arc..was an arc of love...thank you..i will try to find a substitute for words this could take a day or too, but i think i invented a new form of communication using pistacio shells(i ate the seeds, huge addict) i'll keep you informed. also thanx for your beakian words of wisdom, if i feel a bit beakish tomorrow.no one will blame me, for my beak as been over dipped, and my hoof is wanted by the "glue brothers". big reward! god bless all of thee...dark beer all around. tell the shadowed cherub i said hello! and god too if you'd like, bon voyage!
Re: The Beggar by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	7-Aug-02/4:47 PM
i actually quoted this to a one bi-cuspid toothed vicious bean pole skinny vagrant last night when she started rubbing on me for cigarettes. i shouldn't have...she never left me alone, and now i've had to move her in, but she does vaccuum..naked..pest control-maid. brash concept.but ...just..maybe...do-able..gotta go! punch has arrivedd
Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8	7-Aug-02/4:33 PM
cheers to you lass.. loved your heckling this morning as always. post one of your longer pieces i'm sick of scanning faddish haikus.i need something tar tar..e
Re: Nobody's Story (A guide thru chaos) by horus8	7-Aug-02/4:31 PM
words you say aye..and of on all days my birth day..you are swill and should be bent at the knee..but since i'm drunk i'll only pee. on your dog and flowers too. on your front porch is my flaming poo! that's how we greet micks' where i'm from..a golden place with dark black rum.. oh doylum rules..bannana peel slide..then off into the night. i have more potatos and shredded leprachaun stew..stop by..it's my party damnit..and i'm being rude to my guests by being ruder to you. but rest assured my young tender lad you are HUGE in my HUGE mind. and as bill murray once replied brilliantly, "at least i,ve got that going for me". caddy shack (the orignal)
Re: My Sun by Sigh'ense...	7-Aug-02/2:56 PM
Ra is good/Ra is great/helmet on and procreate. I pumped the pimp for pounds! I pumped the pimp for gimp. I have no clue as to what i'm talking about. well lit poem. Almost too lit. I'm lit! I'm lit! whohoooo! Ouch burn..ed.my. HAIR ON FIRE! MAN DOWN! MAN DOWN! AHHHHH. SHIT..SHIT 911. <this message has been cut short due to a lack of present brain activity, <feed my dog oliander> o
Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul	6-Aug-02/8:26 PM
i don't wear ad-idd-as. i walk bare-footed to hand select my papyrus and pull my quill from the arse of a spanish hill turkey. then. nude. i write to you a comment in five seconds..more moving than all of your combined work..for you..out of a love for writing. there is nothing wrong with the children. and fuck the chinese. cuz you meant taiwan. sweat shop children have nothing to do with fortune cookies..got that! "thoughtfulsoul" that's your metaphor of the day. use your pen to change the world, or fucking hand it to someone that can. Next! key word here is "thoughtful" not "thinkfool"a
Re: AIDS in a Glass by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	6-Aug-02/8:18 PM
hey DA. how's it going? good!..anyway i thought before i went to santamonica for the evening i would drop you a chit, and just say that number 3) on poeties return comment is simply unrefined enlightenment, and i truly do get a life altering read from not only your comments but also your incredibly evolved inner struggle. i knew from the first thing of yours that i read..you were onto something monumental..you truly do make writing both enjoyable and more then meets the eye. I wake up to see what you've written. If you can affect me that way then you're well past 50%. push onward peer. your points are finer than silk. i wish you all a good night. p.s. i could care less about kissing your ring finger..but i'm serious when i say that you are brilliant.so fuck off! see ya to-mor-row...
Re: God's Rod (toilet drink poem) by horus8	6-Aug-02/1:54 PM
Yes..yes..and yes, my dark well read fallen accuser. i function more efficiently that way, and the metaphysical jargonic symbols have been seeping from my left nipple ever since the flood of '93'. they locked me up in minnesota and forced me to read the clan of the cave bear series. and now look at me my chitin is cracked and my teeth are all crooked, and my paraphenelia is all borrowed. my forehead is sloped, my beak no longer can play a record, and my hoof is showing signs of seperation from the growth plate, and i have just been notified that tomorrow i turn 28! sedate.sedate!SEDATE! what! no pension?
Re: unidentified by <~>	6-Aug-02/12:57 PM
fuck the bruises where's my wallet and dog, and who's the dead chick in the closet wearing my feathered beret?
Re: THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8	6-Aug-02/12:53 PM
when i did time..my bitches name was "bacchus" notice proper spelling in quotes. you fuck! p.s. i too know where you hide your pennies.pauper.drainplug.butplug.flapjack.
Re: Existence by ThoughtfulSoul	6-Aug-02/11:30 AM
well first you have to be kidnapped from your bed one night. then driven into the desert by mr. self control, your nice neighbor that gives you candy. then bound, sodomized, and burned alive while your parents are at home getting high and 'swinging'. What, not tenacious enough for you. how about practicing what your name implys and being a little more patient and open minded. venting, is how the dutch stay healthy. all bow to the 'flying dutchman'.i
Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z	6-Aug-02/11:14 AM
it's really a very specific style hinge ya see. first, it involves not wanting to be involved. second, it takes guts, and a bad sense of grammatical flatulence. third, if i concerned myself with such trifle insecurities as commas.periods/hyphons.and other 'filler' i would not be able to sleep at night. sleep/ go crazy/sleep/ i'm lazy. lazy boys don't concern themselves with such things, and let's remember i am a real 'streete poete' thus, then, there is no need for commas.for i am verbalizing the spoken word 'flowing', and performing. i am the instrument of god fool!. not the comma counter! that pudding spoon is left for proof readers and editors not the "artist" formerly known as horus8!l
Re: Hot Maid by Agemo-Z	6-Aug-02/12:23 AM
this is like counting the corn in my turd. adventurous.clean american fun!
Re: My ode to "the artist" by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/11:59 PM
"bat dancing" is what carmen electra taught prince to do when she was out filming "art-noir". it's wear he pretends to be deep by riding motorcycles, wearing glasses, and strutting his terminaly misinterpreted boo hoo my daddy was mean to my mommy and i come from a mixed marriage(lets all take a moment for mr.1999) okay! fuck him, which you would(i forgive you cuz his cock has been run over by a crash up derby) regardless, i like when doves cry, he doesn't.point he's a huge male dyke that prays on the minds of young women with "mothering complexes" have fun with it, doesn't that sound like a heroically challinging sphinx with a riddle! heres a haiku for you! prince "the moose knuckle".he is neither black or white. that's why he's so sprite! -----------sponsored by fermentor "the way to treat your neighbors right"i
Re: The Final Victor by Sterling5583	5-Aug-02/11:42 PM
What is this lee majors playing hitler to farah fawcets poccahonas still your mixture of prose poem is almost redeeming.a
Re: Virgin Poet by emilyowey	5-Aug-02/10:57 PM
okay..shall i use lube..or go for the dry sigh?n
Re: non ars poetica by genezapoetica	5-Aug-02/10:53 PM
i touch me! but feel ...you? yes..you!.
Re: Summer Thunder by Wayne	5-Aug-02/10:52 PM
double spacing is a thunderously deafning.. look see me now..i am deef..and spent..take me to bed. the thunder said!e
Re: A-Team, vol I by Agemo-Z	5-Aug-02/10:48 PM
"i just love it when a plan comes together" ABC 1983.