Comments byhorus8, 861–880 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Love till you hate by NNirvana13666 21 Aug 2003, 1:23 PM
That's tempting my devil fork.
replying on How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer 21 Aug 2003, 1:04 PM
I'd say. Ha ha ha, are you saying YOU ARE INTO MURDER?

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replying on quarter-step (abridged) by richa 21 Aug 2003, 1:01 PM
All the better reason to fuck.
on quarter-step (abridged) by richa 21 Aug 2003, 11:59 AM
You are old, but hey, I'd fuck you.
on You and I by Nirvana13666 21 Aug 2003, 11:47 AM
Sometimes, I think back on when I lost it all, again, for the 100th time, and I laugh hysterically until I pop out from behind it all, and say "surprise" with a mindset for murder.

Sorry, I've been on a big murder kick lately. The doctor in my mind says it's because I realized for the first time on an extremely subconscious level that I am in control of nothing. Because, outwardly I'm so good at being a leader and controling everything in beatifully harmonious simplicity...I've been having a hard time swallowing the truth about the universe, but now I can read minds and see the future, so... that all balanced out, I guess. Anyway, I'm currently building the perfect killer, and he's a very handsome & handy young man. My sweet baby Frankenstein. You do of course realize that because I know you, I will be even harder on your poetry, because I want your poetry to look like you inside and out. Perfect.
on Blind Sight by Nirvana13666 21 Aug 2003, 11:38 AM
Much better.
on super-power by Nirvana13666 21 Aug 2003, 11:35 AM
Maybe they read this poem and were stupifed.
on faulty fate by Nirvana13666 21 Aug 2003, 11:30 AM
Sounds like you need to condense this into a fortune cookie and sit on it for another ten weeks.
on How A Panhandler Kills by SupremeDreamer 21 Aug 2003, 11:20 AM
It was good up to the point where you had to deliver the 'message'. Then it was a yawn.
Here are two facts.

1. A man with three kids never hops out of a toyota,
he slowly slides.

2. A man that dreams of murder? Does not love or stay with a cheating whore. He moves on to his dreams, and better things... Like MURDERING.
replying on When Fairy Tales Forgive Us by J.B. Manning 21 Aug 2003, 11:11 AM
You should let me show you how to improve this.
replying on Wolverines, me, and the last American Buffalo. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 21 Aug 2003, 11:00 AM
That depends on the direction of my bunny ears.
Baba, you should of wrote my name down your shaft. For Eric and Liver! May your Mammary live on.
replying on Breaking the wind (An Odenelle to Pirgaytes) by Bachus 19 Aug 2003, 9:55 AM
Either that, or I wrote what I felt from the inner most shelfs of my hart. Care for a toot?
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 6:18 PM
Turn on your black light.
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 6:16 PM
I want you to kill me. Give yourelf a chrystal meth enima, red eye a flight out, and do me dead with a burnt bent smack spoon... Please, kill me.
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 5:34 PM
Yes and yes. B======D---------

I'm a straight shooter.
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 3:06 PM
Wheel, you're still a pup. Your time will coma.
on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 3:04 PM
Oh lordy someone gave me a zero. Darnit, that was poopy of them P{> (I am a pirate with an whitey powered eye patch) lol.
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 2:59 PM
IN EHR..AQ. lol, get it?
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8 18 Aug 2003, 2:58 PM
COME ON!!!!!!! LIVE MAN! LIVE! IT'S FUCKING MURDER! AND IT'S FUCKING FREE!!!!!! FREE! DON'T YOU FEEL THE FREE LOVE!? IN MURDERING.