replying on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8
24 Aug 2003, 1:00 PM
Also, everyone has herpes, whether or not they (the herpes) show themselves is a combination of emotional, physical and spiritual stress and the current state of their immune systems response to said outbursts.
on Candle Lit Night by LuckyJoe
23 Aug 2003, 8:00 PM
Christ, that was a tuna tube steak in a tuba on the tundra surrounded by tanya harding handrinos.
replying on To My Grave by Bonehiss
23 Aug 2003, 5:36 PM
I wouldn't kick him out of bed if he was, anyway, but it's not.
replying on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
23 Aug 2003, 7:05 AM
Absolutely, it would be my honor.
Let me get this straight. You have two votes a 6 and a 7, which in all due respect should be a 3 and a 4, but me, and my pal the 'dream' were feeling very giving at that moment and empathetic to your obvious state of current retardation. And you are calling us "mean"? Though you're the one that just went upstairs and stabbed yourself due to a lack of communication and self pity. Sweet heart, it is you that is being a bit to hard on yourself. What you've written here is not a poem it is a bloody pair of teenage cotton briefs.
replying on D.I.Y.M Syndrome by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 6:17 PM
That's nothing I rhymed Hep C with pepsi last month and broke the moons wind, in half. It was very romantic.
replying on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8
22 Aug 2003, 5:24 PM
You know for an old woman, you say buddy just like a guy (but gay and jewish with a toupee) with a mouthfull of pennys.
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 5:03 PM
From Poseidon, Aphrodite appeared,
Eyes aquamarine, and true as the dawn.
From her virgin flesh all wave horses reared,
As an Ocean bowed when she walked upon.
Immaculate goddess of men's delight,
Embrace me as if I was Hephaestus
After fire pounding steel all day and night.
My mouth to yours, my hands to your discus'.
But my loss serves the will of the sky God
Your uncle loves you enough to kill me.
As the storm brings me down I find it's odd
that love between men and gods cannot be.
My love and my life to you I bequeeth
I am yours out at sea just underneath.
Eyes aquamarine, and true as the dawn.
From her virgin flesh all wave horses reared,
As an Ocean bowed when she walked upon.
Immaculate goddess of men's delight,
Embrace me as if I was Hephaestus
After fire pounding steel all day and night.
My mouth to yours, my hands to your discus'.
But my loss serves the will of the sky God
Your uncle loves you enough to kill me.
As the storm brings me down I find it's odd
that love between men and gods cannot be.
My love and my life to you I bequeeth
I am yours out at sea just underneath.
on The Coming Light by poetandknowit
22 Aug 2003, 4:10 PM
AN ORIGINAL OBSERVATION! AN ORIGINAL TITLE! The poem however, gave me gas the equivelant of a four day old wet burritto. When you got to the part where the city was in the backdrop, I thought, "wow" he' so poetic. Then I laughed, and went and took a short shit.
on The Plan by Rilke4ClosetLesbians
22 Aug 2003, 4:05 PM
Elizabeth Taylor failed miserably.
on The Angel at the arcade (this is actually an 'acne') by scitz
22 Aug 2003, 4:03 PM
Feeling okay? Today I auditioned in speedos and when I bent over my hernia popped up my hemhoroid popped over and a baby mouse cried.
on Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:57 PM
Is amp.
on What Do You Want From Me? by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:55 PM
Hilarious, as funny as birdman's hero poem easilly.
on Enantiodromia by Bonehiss
22 Aug 2003, 3:53 PM
Bone hiss rocks. Superb poetry.
on Aphrodite (edited) by Caducus
22 Aug 2003, 1:39 PM
A really brave attempt. I could edit this.
replying on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8
22 Aug 2003, 1:13 AM
According to the most unrecent popular mechanics I could pull out from underneath my drunk great uncle at JPL people that work for the federal government or state government and make between 36,000 and 52,000 dollars a year, and think that they have achieved their corn fed goals? Apparently make quite pleasant lap dogs.
replying on Women have Babies and Men Murder. by horus8
22 Aug 2003, 1:09 AM
Wow you're clever, but what does this poem have to do with me or my sister? Do you know my sister? Or me? Or was that some how your way of being bad mannered?
on Forget it...k? by psikosis
21 Aug 2003, 2:58 PM
Could you talk more about the opening of legs?
on walk out by NNirvana13666
21 Aug 2003, 1:25 PM
I would end at controlling, and work on shaping your structures.