replying on Fusion by Kitch
21 Jun 2003, 11:32 AM
satisfys spelled wrong though I believe (I'm just talking to myself, ignore me) but keep that in mind
The whispering wind spoke our names,
and what if fate listened?
As those two bodies glistened.
Two lips kissing by crackling twigs,
and toasty split flames.
What if I were stroking your spine,
with smoother of fingers?
Touching you in broken rhymes of spontaneity.
That beg you come play with me.
Where sensation lingers
nocturnally.
Beauty, they say, is skin deep.
So I must kiss you from outside in.
Until you scream, and find your dreams spent
relaxing to fein collapsable satasfaction.
I'll be stretching you completely.
So your body winds right.
Kissing you indiscreetly 'till you feel just me.
'till the moon yields waning
Into a sun that knows no night.
Stroking your hair violently,
Whilst oscillating silently.
Waiting for your crime to be.
Some said thing to crave and profile
If it helps the moment,
I'll say "I love you".
If this attraction proves too hot
No one shall tire, but you when green lights stop.
The twirling fans shadow.
Cooling sweat on a well worked man.
I'll kiss the pink off your lips,
and crawl me a wildfire between your hips,
and then in the morning I'll request a name.
To do it again all day and retain
This is no illusion, but if I'm wrong,
please do not say
Just carnal chess in full fusion
Let our bodies play.
and what if fate listened?
As those two bodies glistened.
Two lips kissing by crackling twigs,
and toasty split flames.
What if I were stroking your spine,
with smoother of fingers?
Touching you in broken rhymes of spontaneity.
That beg you come play with me.
Where sensation lingers
nocturnally.
Beauty, they say, is skin deep.
So I must kiss you from outside in.
Until you scream, and find your dreams spent
relaxing to fein collapsable satasfaction.
I'll be stretching you completely.
So your body winds right.
Kissing you indiscreetly 'till you feel just me.
'till the moon yields waning
Into a sun that knows no night.
Stroking your hair violently,
Whilst oscillating silently.
Waiting for your crime to be.
Some said thing to crave and profile
If it helps the moment,
I'll say "I love you".
If this attraction proves too hot
No one shall tire, but you when green lights stop.
The twirling fans shadow.
Cooling sweat on a well worked man.
I'll kiss the pink off your lips,
and crawl me a wildfire between your hips,
and then in the morning I'll request a name.
To do it again all day and retain
This is no illusion, but if I'm wrong,
please do not say
Just carnal chess in full fusion
Let our bodies play.
on Women Fight Dirty by scitz
21 Jun 2003, 10:25 AM
Tight edit. Did you read my Sestina yet? I play both ways like neon deon shizowee for dowry.
replying on Women Fight Dirty by scitz
21 Jun 2003, 10:23 AM
You bought Tony Robbins book too. Do you expect him to be flattered by your cry for acceptance. Stick to what you can do (suck an okay cock) Writers could give a fucking toot who reads their blither, save your book cash for conditioner.
on Elephant Man by Kitch
21 Jun 2003, 10:12 AM
Elephant tic (whyku) by Lyme disease
Better pack your trunk
Cuz we're moving on up
Dumbo needs peanuts
Better pack your trunk
Cuz we're moving on up
Dumbo needs peanuts
on Z higher of arts by ==Doylum
21 Jun 2003, 10:02 AM
A dandy
replying on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
21 Jun 2003, 9:59 AM
Thanks, you read Jeremi's sestina yet? It's choice, and hard as fuck to write. I should know I wrote it.
on Horus8 Vs. Book Learning by TanHand
21 Jun 2003, 9:49 AM
Look me up on the IMgayK last year I won the Girdled fluffer award, and this month I was runner up for prostitue of the month award at the Peninsula. I would of won, but Serge (the winner) has a ten inch cock, where as, I only have an assorted lego dove tail.
on I'll love you Heather, for ever and ever by TanHand
21 Jun 2003, 9:31 AM
A superior work by all accounts.
on Fuckface by poemwanker
21 Jun 2003, 2:40 AM
Face fuck (whyku) by cheap pillow
With hands clenching ears
I use her nose to unzip
Then I clocked in
With hands clenching ears
I use her nose to unzip
Then I clocked in
replying on A trap door for the moat by Bachus
21 Jun 2003, 1:43 AM
Oh, you got me... "Josey, the worlds turning black now, hold me Josey... We sure licked them blue bellies aye Josie?" A quote from the outlaw Josey Wales. You know I would attempt a rebuttle, but I already wrote the best one last week, and here it is. http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?i
replying on An enchillada called revenge! by horus8
21 Jun 2003, 1:30 AM
Perhaps, that was the point, wire hair Frita with the stinky fingas.
replying on Midsummer, almost by Nicholas Jones
20 Jun 2003, 1:24 PM
Inconsistent Jesus
Bore more than a cross
Started a One God Virus
Then up and left town
Bore more than a cross
Started a One God Virus
Then up and left town
on Detox by OneFingerAnswer
20 Jun 2003, 10:25 AM
GQT
on Nonentities by scitz
20 Jun 2003, 10:20 AM
tada rata tada tadada tadada tadadda rata ta
on I'll Just Have a Salad by jessicazee
20 Jun 2003, 10:16 AM
The end fumbles so fucking bad chicky middle finger, but right before I got to it, I thought you were there for sure (the poetry zone), have an 8.
on Midsummer, almost by Nicholas Jones
20 Jun 2003, 10:11 AM
found a telescope
then fell asleep before the
stars spread over me
then fell asleep before the
stars spread over me
on Midsummer, almost by Nicholas Jones
20 Jun 2003, 10:10 AM
Close
replying on Black liqourice & G-stringed orphans by horus8
20 Jun 2003, 10:07 AM
I took out a third, that should roll better.