on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 6:43 AM
Ok . wish granted. Hope you are happy.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:49 AM
sounds like a drinking song.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:47 AM
sounds irish.
on Soap Star Stud Haikus by <{Baba^Yaga}>
16 May 2003, 5:29 AM
Lucky never slept with his mom. That's ridiculous.
on A Buncha Dungeons and Dragons Haiku by razorgrin
16 May 2003, 5:32 AM
I'm Unfamiliar
on Happy Cancer! by Agemo-Z
16 May 2003, 5:33 AM
you've nailed down the sense of mystery--so much that I have no idea what the hell this is supposed to be. but I like it.
on Jokie Smurf by Bachus
16 May 2003, 5:26 AM
I like it.
on Transformers "a higher, vaster, deeper meaning". by Bachus
16 May 2003, 5:26 AM
nice toy theme, an excellent sense of playfulness
on form: haibun by Poetsettle
16 May 2003, 5:27 AM
sma ll typo "shes" but a lovely poem.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
I can relate to that. I broke a rib last weekend riding a donkey.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:50 AM
what is a fornice? a furnace? call me confused.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
an insightful alck of vulgarity compared to your other poems. more like this, please.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 10:11 AM
powerful, except you could stengthen the impact by losing the "tiny thong underwear" line--it borders on perversion and i don't think that's what you wanted here.
on The day Pan out-played Apollo by Bachus
14 Mar 2003, 6:48 AM
I liked it OK. the part about never getting "laid" sounds common.
on Orders to My Zombie Legions by razorgrin
14 Mar 2003, 6:49 AM
Grated dead would be funny, too. like parmesan.
on some deleted poem
14 Mar 2003, 6:45 AM
very nice--reminded me of an e e cummings poem about the baloonman whistling far and wee...
on advice for the heated by <~>
13 Mar 2003, 9:54 AM
cute and suggestive.
on some deleted poem
18 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
lame.