poemranker ::20 most recent comments by hipster flare (81-100)

Comments byhipster flare, 81–100 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:29 AM
Nicely Done.
on Got Balls? by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:42 AM
tasty. sounds chewy.
on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:25 AM
most excellent. nicely done. tengo fuego en mi pantalones.
on Pinjur by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:46 AM
god with a small i. catchy.
on Crucifixion by Mr Pig 13 Mar 2003, 9:30 AM
I like wine and bread, too.
on Stuck in the Past... by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:47 AM
somebody bored? Don't like history class?
on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni 13 Mar 2003, 9:48 AM
weak
on Missing You by psychedelic 13 Mar 2003, 9:28 AM
get rid of addressing the reader as "you", and escape from the ordinary in line 2.
on Grampa's Proverb by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 9:27 AM
grandpa liked moonshine, didn't he?
on Hippy's Ode to Eternity by bondjedi 13 Mar 2003, 9:31 AM
title stinks. first two lines are great. last is lacking.
on Aries, the God of war by Shardik 13 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
hooving rams crash horns
on some deleted poem 13 Mar 2003, 9:33 AM
lacks depth i think.
on Loud Taps by celiff 13 Mar 2003, 9:34 AM
title must go--eliminate redundancies--haiku is too short for repetition.
on Beer by Yardbird 13 Mar 2003, 9:38 AM
the title gives too much away and makes it ordinary.
on Litany of the Mullet by Shin-Bojangles 13 Mar 2003, 9:39 AM
I get it.
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum 13 Mar 2003, 9:41 AM
what a chewy lumpo of dung. also not a haiku.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8 13 Mar 2003, 9:44 AM
OK
on Shadow's First Attempt at Haiku by loneshadow29 13 Mar 2003, 9:45 AM
keep trying. avaoid cliche's that sound like elton john songs.
on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer 13 Mar 2003, 9:52 AM
work out redundancies...
on You'd think by ~incarnate~ 13 Mar 2003, 9:53 AM
4-6-6 ?
Do over.