on not even soup by <~>
13 Jan 2003, 9:38 AM
sent to bed with no dinner, eh? staring out the window? this speaks to me that way. nicely done!
on Nature's Artistry by Quarton
13 Jan 2003, 9:40 AM
Consider it a clash of styles, but it seems like you've used a lot of words to say very little.
on When she beats me by Win
13 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
decnt poem, could possibly use more concise images.
on Little Miss Muff by Spider-Man
13 Jan 2003, 9:26 AM
I am terminally confused. What exactly does it mean to hae "pulled"? It seems like it may be something sinister and remarkably Andrew Dice Clay oriented. I cannot give this a high score.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 9:28 AM
I like it on many levels--it seems to speak to days i've had. Bravo. a 9.
on haiku 1 by Crakyamuni
13 Jan 2003, 9:30 AM
intersting commentary. I like how it feels like a game of pick-up sticks--powerful words thrown together--touching each other with a mix of order and chaos.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 9:32 AM
there is a sadness here that permeates the sarcasm. nicely done.
on some deleted poem
13 Jan 2003, 9:36 AM
mimickry may have been seen as high flattery to Elvis--but of course he wore a white studded jumpsuit and did a lot of drugs. Perhaps this was an attempt at respect for -=Dark Angel=-, bvut I think you've failed, and now you look like a fat guy in a jumpsuit with a mullet and sideburns.
on Shit happens by Bobjim the II
8 Jan 2003, 9:40 AM
Something on your mind?
on Shit happens by Bobjim the II
8 Jan 2003, 9:42 AM
Something on your mind?
on Conversation with a Clock III by morffrom
8 Jan 2003, 9:44 AM
at's almost sad, but the "spring has spring" soiunds cliche or sing-songy, taking away from a mood that might surface from underneath.
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 9:45 AM
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on The Politics of Fashion by bondjedi
8 Jan 2003, 9:46 AM
nobody watches that anyways.
on Grandma by waltfreakinwhitman
8 Jan 2003, 9:48 AM
Are you my cousin? we should get married. I suspect the only thing truly molested here is the art from of Haiku.
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
8 Jan 2003, 9:50 AM
groovy. a bit wordy for a haiku, eh?
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 9:52 AM
nicely done.
on Haiku for Mum by waltfreakinwhitman
8 Jan 2003, 9:53 AM
planning on being "born again" are we? how christian of you!
on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar
8 Jan 2003, 9:56 AM
masengil.
on some deleted poem
8 Jan 2003, 9:47 AM
I ghot a later one of this series before this. I think they should've been posted as a series of haiku on one post.
on 9/11 by dougsoderstrom
8 Jan 2003, 9:49 AM
groovy.