poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (461-480)

Comments byJeremi B. Handrinos, 461–480 back. Include replies

on some deleted poem 9 Jan 2003, 5:22 PM
I can't quite see the veins on its marble buttocks. Perhaps, i need my spectacles.
on I wish by trisha 9 Jan 2003, 5:35 PM
they are.
on I gots me a postcard, motherfucker. by <{Baba^Yaga}> 12 Jan 2003, 3:08 PM
perch-er.
on some deleted poem 12 Jan 2003, 3:32 PM
my freak devotion , adding of course freak for perfect pentameter. nice name by the way.
on lost love by cherish 10 Jan 2003, 2:12 PM
indubitably..oh, you meant horus horus..my bad. still, i do indeed agree wholeheartedly without hesitation.
on some deleted poem 9 Jan 2003, 5:30 PM
Yes, I have seen this once before.
When Count Vlad impaled the Turks.
Thank you Bachus for the warning.
I will keep keep it in mind.
on some deleted poem 9 Jan 2003, 5:53 PM
You could improve the power of the nouns and adjectives by opening a thesaurus and a dictionary..the structure and theme, and the arc are fine. I will give you a ten to get you back to five.
on some deleted poem 9 Jan 2003, 6:53 PM
Actually, that's a hello kitty shot. Lets sell it to Japan. I want 15%. And Half of the frachises royalties.
on Kindling by <~> 9 Jan 2003, 7:03 PM
Better a wood stove than a burn barrel. Very well titled, and delivered.