on On Wanting to Know The Truth by dougsoderstrom
15 Jan 2003, 1:14 PM
What kind of haiku is this?
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 10:49 AM
Sure. Pass me the tapatio. Thanks.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 3:36 PM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
you fail
you fail
on Where is My BabyGirl? by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
13 Jan 2003, 6:23 PM
made into vellum. your rasp is a rasp-berry.
on Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss
14 Jan 2003, 10:33 AM
minatory. i like it. great title too.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 10:17 AM
there once? yeah that's original same old style same old thing.
on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
15 Jan 2003, 10:20 AM
i was hoping the second one would payoff, but the third was the proof in the pudding. Zombie pudding.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 10:49 AM
"Like a halo from a forgotten painting" yeah that's rare, how was the painting forgotten when there's more halo'd renaissance paintings than b movies out there.
Your style would be stronger if you just made it a sonnet since it has fourteen lines and a rhyme scheme almost already. the title is the best aspect since it's accurate, but the poem seems stale in comparisson to some of your others, like lord byron before he was lord. Someone said you were the best poet on this sight yesterday? I do not believe there is such a thing on this sight and it would be redundant to think in those terms as a poet anyway, because i obviously know you do not think that. I can tell by your writing. You are talented though and a fine poet. 7.
Your style would be stronger if you just made it a sonnet since it has fourteen lines and a rhyme scheme almost already. the title is the best aspect since it's accurate, but the poem seems stale in comparisson to some of your others, like lord byron before he was lord. Someone said you were the best poet on this sight yesterday? I do not believe there is such a thing on this sight and it would be redundant to think in those terms as a poet anyway, because i obviously know you do not think that. I can tell by your writing. You are talented though and a fine poet. 7.
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 10:55 AM
Yes, this was a swell read. A bit long (but a great outline). Some really choice and vibrant lines (hornets honey is a fine staple).
hub a bub bub two sheep in as tub bub. have a 9. because it's been done like this before.
hub a bub bub two sheep in as tub bub. have a 9. because it's been done like this before.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 10:43 AM
It's a shame that his imagination crushed you all months ago. This poem is just pointlessly stuffed wiuth the echo's of your past squashings. You should seriously consider leaving Angel nimrodding to us highly paid and revered professionals. Unless of course your friend has Aids than you might still have a chance. Next time aim for either his splendid face, his shoehorn, or cover his nudity prior to blowing off your own thumbs.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 11:07 AM
You are frightening, and excruciatingly sybaritic. I think.
Try Gouda next time. That brie will do very strange things to ones mind late at night. Sorry for the indigestion. Better Helen than Dark angel though..Wait...They'RE THE SAME PEOPLE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
MY POWER SIGN IS A BEAKLESS PENGUIN
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! the chirping sweet jesus!..help me!. (i would vote on this, but obviously that would be a ridiculous undertaking and prove that i'm mentally ill) My doctor warned me about talking to myself and darkangel in the same day, hour, or minute.horus8 coincidentally is currently working sec. for ms. carter (isn't that odd?), so where were we again? ah yeah. saying cheese.
Try Gouda next time. That brie will do very strange things to ones mind late at night. Sorry for the indigestion. Better Helen than Dark angel though..Wait...They'RE THE SAME PEOPLE NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
MY POWER SIGN IS A BEAKLESS PENGUIN
NOOOOOOOOOOOOO! the chirping sweet jesus!..help me!. (i would vote on this, but obviously that would be a ridiculous undertaking and prove that i'm mentally ill) My doctor warned me about talking to myself and darkangel in the same day, hour, or minute.horus8 coincidentally is currently working sec. for ms. carter (isn't that odd?), so where were we again? ah yeah. saying cheese.
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 11:33 AM
beautiful peignoir. ivory?
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 11:37 AM
Aegri somnia.
on Thorns of Grace by smlink84
14 Jan 2003, 11:40 AM
die! jesus freak and a good shabbas to you!
on some deleted poem
14 Jan 2003, 10:30 AM
You are insane. I rather enjoyed it.
My favorite moments in this transcription were the ph neutral and the diplomatic bag. I'm confused on merlot though, but are you attempting to sell me the hucklebuck? You're a sordid sort and indeed the loneliest creature i have never met. I am going to go watch G force now.d
My favorite moments in this transcription were the ph neutral and the diplomatic bag. I'm confused on merlot though, but are you attempting to sell me the hucklebuck? You're a sordid sort and indeed the loneliest creature i have never met. I am going to go watch G force now.d
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 10:57 AM
Awesome.9
on some deleted poem
15 Jan 2003, 1:16 PM
Almost a laiason.