on A Voice Found by Blake
9 Nov 2003, 5:05 AM
Congratulations on writing a totally unreadable chunk of junk dungke.
on "On My Love" by Blake
9 Nov 2003, 5:07 AM
You should be beaten with a loaf of stale meatloaf. your poetry is incredibly to contrived with porkchops and applesauce.
on Phonecall from zombies on Uranus by Y2kSlamPoet
9 Nov 2003, 5:11 AM
Halfed cans can be deadly to late night pipe creating tweaklings. That's for sure.
on A Glitter ring trip to Fance (Whats on your Picobird) by ==Doylum
9 Nov 2003, 5:13 AM
Like an exploding down pillow against the head of a t-shirted skivied sleep over gal.
on some deleted poem
9 Nov 2003, 5:35 AM
Christian heavy metal saves souls and introduces young couples all at the same time.
on Ambition? by TheTiredTyrant
9 Nov 2003, 5:37 AM
Chalk outline of a dead carrot.
on The story of the myopic fishwife OR She: A muse t' me by ==Doylum
9 Nov 2003, 5:39 AM
Bathos is Greek for going down on Forever at the electorial bath house votathon and Binge sale.
on Arachnid by quantumenterprises
9 Nov 2003, 5:41 AM
I like spiders. My tarantula will occasionally devour a baby mouse in a five hour period. And it warns my of fires and impending earthquakes, or weird geothermal situations.
on Summertime by KatieKaBoom
9 Nov 2003, 5:48 AM
All the time. Only aware energy has the strength to residue for eternally uncalculable periods of times upon other's that you've impressed in your life and various points in being. Otherwise, you will lead a most uneventful and easilly forgetable life on this planet if you don't know how to change your awareness.
on i will bare it: by Sapphire
9 Nov 2003, 5:49 AM
This poem looked and resembled Helen Keller taking a long nap. At least to me it did.
on some deleted poem
9 Nov 2003, 5:54 AM
If you added structure? you'd have a hippy night out to forget along with your keys, wallet and ride the next day.
on Mellow by frostygirl
9 Nov 2003, 5:56 AM
Why do the ladies always fall the hardest for the homos? inaccessibility drives them pure red lipstick and fishnets.
on devil by pitchblackdisaster
9 Nov 2003, 5:57 AM
A Poopmare, in vivid zero dimension.
on Selective Alopecia by Ming T. Merciless
9 Nov 2003, 5:58 AM
Man baby
Man baby
that's your poem.
Man baby
that's your poem.
on Gut Feeling, A Burst of by liquidlama
9 Nov 2003, 6:00 AM
You must be a liquid lama?
on Every other weekend by Corey McHattan
9 Nov 2003, 6:02 AM
Great way to avoid any conflict story wise! Though it tried to make you several times. You still avoided giving it life.