on Decay by INTRANSIT
20 Oct 2003, 2:24 PM
Might I suggest a collapsing parking structure and a legless prostitute in a rusting radio flyer?
on Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer
20 Oct 2003, 2:29 PM
Call it "Drug Addict".
on some deleted poem
20 Oct 2003, 2:33 PM
Catchy and glandular.
on freewrite~1-10-10/11am by shadowaura
1 Nov 2003, 6:45 PM
"-over" should be 'ever'.
on some deleted poem
1 Nov 2003, 6:49 PM
A mocumentary
on Think by necroscope7
2 Nov 2003, 10:43 AM
Yep!
on Brand-new Blue Book Jacket by Bobjim
2 Nov 2003, 10:45 AM
A masterpiss.
on Just Another Day by dougsoderstrom
2 Nov 2003, 10:50 AM
A bombastic ah, bomb? 12!!!
on the grizzly bear and the dog by A. Nomaly
2 Nov 2003, 4:08 PM
I laughed, I cried, you moved me Bob.
on some deleted poem
2 Nov 2003, 7:23 PM
Easy there Saint Vaginitus you don't want to pull a glute or mis your turn.
on sin by ThePariahDog
2 Nov 2003, 8:03 PM
Even a dung beetle wouldn't roll this shit.
on Texas by Nicholas Jones
2 Nov 2003, 8:09 PM
The thing with Texas is that no matter where you stand it always smells like shit.
on Love (pyramus and thisbe) by New Life Drug
9 Nov 2003, 12:23 AM
"covered in your blood" this should be "And blood covered gloves."?
"Drive it into the heart of mine
death closes your eyes
But it will not part us
from where you lay":
This should be:
Drive into the heart of mine
Let death close your eyes
But it will not part us
from where we shall rise.
"Drive it into the heart of mine
death closes your eyes
But it will not part us
from where you lay":
This should be:
Drive into the heart of mine
Let death close your eyes
But it will not part us
from where we shall rise.
on The Big Blue White Guy by Modulo
9 Nov 2003, 5:01 AM
Sounds Like a tail from the Dakotas.
on caught in the dark by http://fenechia.com
9 Nov 2003, 4:57 AM
I love how you tease yourself with the thought of you even casting a reflection to judge yourself this shrewdly in the first place.
on In these boots by http://David Bowman
9 Nov 2003, 5:00 AM
Is that the equivilant to American expressing away your life to deabth?
on Gypsy by roses are read
9 Nov 2003, 5:02 AM
I bet if it wasn't for your horse you'd have never made it through college?