on Being Called Dave by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
18 Sep 2003, 6:51 PM
Swet.
on THE BEST POEM EVER!!!!!! by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
23 Sep 2003, 11:30 AM
Did you watch Carnivale last night?
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:37 PM
Weirdly vaguely literate. That's Aced!
on You Had To Go by peaceseeker
21 Sep 2003, 7:25 PM
That's heavy.
on Oedipus' last glass of bubbles by <{Baba^Yaga}>
18 Sep 2003, 8:34 PM
What really amazes me about poemranker is: that this absolute shrine of a haiku is being avoid as far as votes go... yet it's the most read? That's The Jew factor people making you nosey yet weak. you disgust me. You make me all want to eat your three legged vulvas.
on some deleted poem
18 Sep 2003, 6:53 PM
A nice premonition.
on some deleted poem
13 Sep 2003, 2:18 PM
Hi Tom! I like skiing in the alps, and walking my dog at the park. I'm single, professional, and packing heat! I like boats, goats, and floats, but parades put me to sleep.
on Stygian Serpent by SupremeDreamer
21 Sep 2003, 7:21 PM
I just picked up an 8 ball, cheers. Salton Sea you later.
on Let's Dance by temptalia
23 Sep 2003, 12:47 PM
Oh my... That sounds lovely. The piece could stand an edit. An the meantime here's an eight.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2003, 11:23 AM
I think your head is full of "ether", and probably your small intestine. do you really believe that Jews are being persecuted in America? I hope you do, because, as far as polarity is concerned you are backwards, like your hat, shading your ass.
on some deleted poem
23 Sep 2003, 11:26 AM
Greatest title yet (this morning) but a tad too long. Here's a nine, As compared to your other work this is a huge improvement. I think you need more metaphorical links within your tale betwen the grocery store and the middle east. That would send this poem into a much moe interesting category.
on SupremeDreamer by Nirvana13666
23 Sep 2003, 11:37 AM
Good lord, I didn't know you guys had met?
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 12:01 PM
ha ha ha ha...WHO? lol.
on some deleted poem
1 Oct 2003, 12:04 PM
A carefully stacked pile of shucked shit.
Amazingly painful and absurdly meaningless.
Because, we were convinced that if anyone could escape death that 'anyone' would've been you?
Amazingly painful and absurdly meaningless.
Because, we were convinced that if anyone could escape death that 'anyone' would've been you?
on A Haiku Haiku by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
1 Oct 2003, 5:59 PM
Clearly you are both smelly corks bobbing in a sea of overly warmed baby brie. 10!
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on death warmed over by kingit
3 Oct 2003, 4:00 PM
More cuts? i was looking for death warmed over easy. My suggestion would be Don't over use an overused style overly. 8
on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 4:42 PM
_O/
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_(o)\_ + A kilo of cocaine and millions
of dollars in settlement money can turn...
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_(o)\_ + A kilo of cocaine and millions
of dollars in settlement money can turn...
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on some deleted poem
3 Oct 2003, 9:58 PM
Iam almost speechless, they say love and hate are parallel so your love for me is deeper then hell, Hmm? You are the first and last of my love,s how does it feel when I ride the swell over eight feet or more of perfection,,I hold my Breath and swalow hard ,,,the O2 I shared with you and then some for ever more your name is a gift, My name is your other half for ever more i love you to death.And resurrection can give a hell of an errection... see you in my reality >HEDWIG Is carved across your heart.