poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Jeremi B. Handrinos (161-180)

Comments byJeremi B. Handrinos, 161–180 back. Include replies

on Plum diggity by tadpole 4 Sep 2003, 5:25 PM
A staggering wok of manure.
on -- by OneFingerAnswer 22 Aug 2003, 2:44 AM
A lovely white head.
on A Surgeons Butchery by SupremeDreamer 22 Aug 2003, 1:43 AM
That was rushed and unprofessional, I know because, I've had dinner twice. with the actor that plays Doctor Giggles. Killing's only fun if one takes their time.
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2003, 1:24 AM
I expected to see a hand inviting me. Hey guess who's at my house right now dude? My mom. that's just wild. She fixed my pinched lower back nerve with a water buffalo bone and olive oil. Kewl. Also, know you are better than this. i want a castle in neon.
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 10:34 PM
Not exactly as good as the other one I read of yours, but still, you have an original taste for style and words. Along with topic, I'm sure you imagine.
on some deleted poem 25 Aug 2003, 2:03 PM
Yeah, but why?
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 10:19 PM
Very good.
on New Horizon by Kitch 30 Aug 2003, 1:49 PM
Well done. 10.
on some deleted poem 4 Sep 2003, 5:29 PM
mmmmmm. That was nice. You are a fine writer.
on Night walker by INTRANSIT 4 Sep 2003, 6:13 PM
Starts of strong, but then does not deliver as well as it could.
on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy 4 Sep 2003, 5:19 PM
Geez, that was like Schindler's list on Zoloft. Complete forced fiction and ridiculously intentional pointless guilt trap crap. 6
My best friend has no skin, so what, who cares? Really? You? Go march for your guilt trip, because i could give a shit. There are so many more important issues occuring now adays that are more pressing then this shit. So 6.
on Memoirs II by http://mulberryfairy 4 Sep 2003, 5:21 PM
And by know means is this anywhere near the best poem on poemranker. people just feel obligated to give it a high mark so that they won't be labled 'prejudice' you trite hack.
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2003, 1:18 AM
Presenting the martha stewart of poetry! Hiccup. I finally figured out who you remind me of. you should take your bachelor's or in your case probably a fucking masters and eat it with whole milk and honey and get fucking grape nutted, or use it as a cunt cork to stop the incessant bible belt boogie spurting from that hole in your fickle face you call poetry. when I finally break your hymen bitch you're gonna cum and piss in my mouth like a new woman. Smoochie baby smoochie moochie. Admit it. You want me.
on Unrealistic by EvenPicturesFade 30 Aug 2003, 1:43 PM
Change needs to occur at a cellular level to be successful.
on Laundry Day by impert&ent 25 Aug 2003, 7:58 PM
Wishy washy, but fun.
on let's pretend that we can write! by val 25 Aug 2003, 3:32 PM
Better than copyrighting shit rants like this.
Damn, I was just about to do one of these called "alms for the armless".
on some deleted poem 3 Sep 2003, 1:54 AM
Amazing.
Happy Birthday, and stay in touch.
on some deleted poem 30 Aug 2003, 8:53 PM
What did he get wings for? Playing horse shoes with a Pot holder. Bitchin.