on Jack Frost by Kitch
18 Aug 2003, 1:16 PM
Grody.
on Life by Son Of A Bitch
18 Aug 2003, 1:17 PM
Juiced.
on Sagadahoc to Hudson by http://mulberryfairy
10 Aug 2003, 12:06 AM
A lovely tale.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2003, 1:44 AM
I gave you the two for your two wisepears.
on Caffeinated Contemplations by J.B. Manning
21 Aug 2003, 8:16 PM
A very brave try.
on A ballerina bubble bath by horus8
18 Aug 2003, 4:38 PM
Look horatio, now you have one poopy blue welsh vote and a poopy blue government fag vote. I see you poopies and I think your blue votes are poopy. So now I will perform for you my yawn of poop =:0> Now wasn't that entertaining?
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 10:01 AM
I gave this a nine last night? Hmmmm, that's odd.
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 9:35 AM
That was funny. I am naked. Often at night when I am to lazy to commit to the other 30 feet required to hit the toilet? I pee in the sink, and it does smell quite horrible, I do confess.
on Voltaic Buss by SupremeDreamer
18 Aug 2003, 9:59 AM
That wasn't very nice. Not very nice at all, but today, I will have you know, I am killing a ballerina with a Sestina, and my friend it will be murder. Did you know that I can write fantastic poetry in every style both handed? While you however are pretending that your on a Harley Davidson of poetry when in fact you're still on that old 1979 Schwinn's hot red bannana seat flicking your tassels and toeing your reflectors. Tsk. Do not fool with murder young man until you have at least written twent to thirty vilanelles, odes and the occasional limmerick haiku concrete lyric. It's immature and does not make you look good in a dress.
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 9:47 AM
Sounds like something dark angek gummed to death then tried to hatch under his pillow. Never write about how you feel directly. It's immature, and will cause you to end your comments with ridiculous side ways faces. Used as ice breakers. Such as ;) or :( 0r :| but tell me... What if the truth is B# ? and we are all just Eyelidless bandaid mouthed buggers. What then Jay bone? will you be ;( or :] because I will get a | and
-------O-|-< from the sky.
-------O-|-< from the sky.
on To <~> (g-shine) by Vanity
10 Aug 2003, 5:16 AM
Yes, pin the tail on the Donkey has never been better. Until last night when a cake popped out of the stripper already blown out, and me and mine left no tip unshined.
on To PinkBunnyofDoom by Vanity
10 Aug 2003, 5:14 AM
There is always an end to the means
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2003, 5:18 AM
I am a Mcdonald's mop in the hand of a brass name tagged manager pushimg for overtime and a new 10,000$ muffler for my 5,000$ rice wok.
on Yellow Cake for Everyone by Retaliate
10 Aug 2003, 1:39 AM
Wolfie is a Jew dog that needs to die.
on 'Where I come from- S.M.C!!' by Hostileintent
10 Aug 2003, 1:42 AM
Yum, good an tite.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2003, 1:43 AM
Sounds just twinkie to me.
on Flowing river by LuckyJoe
10 Aug 2003, 12:07 AM
Yeah, I can edit it for you tomorrow. It needs quite a bit of work, but it's a good start.
on Gaolbreak: Jade Marlboro by DreamerSupreme
10 Aug 2003, 12:09 AM
Geez, that's what I call a snickers break.
on some deleted poem
10 Aug 2003, 12:12 AM
Powerful stuff
on some deleted poem
18 Aug 2003, 9:36 AM
On second read it was better, much better.