on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:45 PM
One problem though, isn't it supposed to be "Grandma" in the title?
on Why... by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:47 PM
Lol. Questions we all ask ourselves. This is thoughful.
on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:45 PM
Marvelous. Jeez I need to improve.
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 8:41 AM
I also noticed your 'discription', it's "dEscription"
on Essential Love by unknown
18 Sep 2002, 5:20 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!
on some deleted poem
9 Oct 2002, 6:31 PM
What means this STRUTH?
on A call to arms by INTRANSIT
7 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM
Unexpectedly Nice, the tongue though seems well...
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
on Why... by livingcanvas
7 Oct 2002, 8:02 AM
...haven't you posted new poetry?
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
27 Sep 2002, 2:05 PM
You must really enjoy being nasty to people, you are the reason I've deleted 10 of my poems from this site. I think I will just move my poems to poetry.com at least there I won't get insulted.
on some deleted poem
26 Sep 2002, 8:40 AM
Lots and lots of typos. Otherwise, it's good. Last word 'skin' not 'ski'. Last line also, 'than' not 'then'. 'Describe' not 'discribe'.
on [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz
18 Sep 2002, 1:16 PM
I don't get it. I think you are describing an un-wanted pregnancy. I guess you blame the man and hate the child<--- this of course was my overall impression.
on Stifled by wordsphincter
18 Sep 2002, 1:24 PM
Hi Word. I think he/she is trying to create an image of eyes receiving and comprehending(grasping) the image of the courts. It's kinda like my use of the words abhor and accrue in my now deleted "Wandering thoughts".
on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:42 PM
Wow! your work is good. Please read my Hope poem and leave a comment. I liked this a lot. I never seem to find your name when I check the random poems though, then again I never see mine even when I'm not logged in yet.
on angelic by deafmute2000
18 Sep 2002, 5:23 PM
Belittling and sweet at the same time. What usually makes me decrease marks is the wrong/non usage of apostrophe. E.g. you're not your and we're not were.
on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 6:06 PM
Hey are you really half African? tell me, tell me! Where did all your points go?
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Sep 2002, 1:11 PM
I guess everyone would have been less irritated if you didn't use the 'n' word, and maybe your so-called message would have been received.
on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 8:18 AM
I thought you said you chatted as fred but you were in fact Frass. How come bein'Vegan is here? hmmm...?
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
16 Sep 2002, 7:21 PM
Oh and guys he clearly states he has a wife.
on Intervention by livingcanvas
19 Sep 2002, 8:16 AM
I'm already forming a tune...:)
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
18 Sep 2002, 1:01 PM
Yuck!eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww. Green semen! eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww.