on The MV-perience by Modulo
11 Sep 2002, 1:10 PM
Huh?(contemplates...)
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
16 Sep 2002, 7:20 PM
You guys are nuts! The poem is a simple description of your feelings around gay men and how you view them.
on Cat and Door by gothwalk
11 Sep 2002, 1:26 PM
lol
on Inner Peace by god
11 Sep 2002, 1:17 PM
Who made you "god"?
on A Dream Awakened by impaired
11 Sep 2002, 2:04 PM
I think in line 15, it should be"....in awe at the colors" not 'at'. The poem sounds Minstrel-like to me. I think the last line can be done without. Nice sensitivity. LOL at your comment Bacchus.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 1:17 PM
Nice one.
on What is Black by ivoryangie1
11 Sep 2002, 1:12 PM
add 'nd' to the 'a' between big and strong. Keep being proud.
on Loneliness by Cha no Onna
11 Sep 2002, 1:12 PM
Hmmm...
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 1:14 PM
lol
on Dick Cheney, Man of Tomorrow by bondjedi
11 Sep 2002, 1:14 PM
LOL LOL LOL!
on Fallen Leaves From a Tree by kristenk69lover
11 Sep 2002, 1:26 PM
You have a nice thing going but like some other commenter said you tend to give your point away so the poem kinda looses it's essence. Try writing(which you are doing a great job of) and then reading through to see which lines you can omit. Poetry(my definition) is the medium through which a person(poet) describes feelings without being too definitive. Good luck. :-)
on The Weaver's Curse by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Sep 2002, 1:28 PM
Is it supposed to be "loon?" Oh yeah it is loom cos it's titled the weaver's curse. Well I don't get it.
on st. valentine's day mascara by crin
11 Sep 2002, 1:29 PM
The naughty little violence in the bedroom seems to be getting a little too naughty.
on some deleted poem
11 Sep 2002, 2:05 PM
"....some magic some magic..." delete one. have a nice day.
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Sep 2002, 5:47 PM
Hey Poetandknowit I hope you read this cause I think your comment was very insulting and uncalled for. If you don't have something nice to say or you do not have constructive corrections then keep your bloody opinions to yourself. Imbecile!