on one word by Blade
11 Dec 2002, 11:38 AM
This does not in any qualify as a free verse!!! How can you insult the laws of poetry and call this a free verse?! Nicompoop! Imbecile! Twerp! Dweeb!
on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:53 AM
I like your poem it is funny.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
And you definitely get a plus for talking 16th century-like. :D
Blade, you really need to get the movie blade out of your head. I bet you know every part of that movie. You and Maria should try not to enjoy the I'm-the-victim, everyone-is-being-mean-to-me rung too much. This is a poetry website. Take a break, like I do. If you wish you could just grab them and shake them, you can't. Besides, you sound extremely dumb and childish (pay attention I didn't say child-like let's not insult children) when you answer criticism with anger and curses. Simply take the criticism, better the poem or get rid of it and start again. Come back when your poems look less like shit(e).
on My Friend? by Blade
11 Dec 2002, 11:22 AM
is gonareha some kind of rotten balsamic sauce over rotten kidney beans dish? How about I give you what you deserve for your effort.
on The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 11:13 AM
Do you eat shit or something? and did you vote 10 times for yourself that must have taken a lot of work and courage.
on My Friend? by Blade
11 Dec 2002, 11:33 AM
Jeez Maria and Blade are getting the last rung since I've been here. Hi blade I'm the bipolar one. I was just about to leave and pretend I did not see the stuff I saw, considering that I have used english wrongly on more than one occassion, I thought I might have some compassion for you. Reading your poem twice changed all that, it is exactly what everyone else calls it: SHIT(E)!!!!
on For the boyfriend I don't have by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:39 AM
How optimistically sweet
on The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:41 AM
Ha ha ha ha ha ha ha! that one's good. Doesn't anyone else see the joke in this? Sweetie did you actually like Ya-ya? be truthful.
on The rendition (once bad movie night) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:42 AM
You should have made the last line more vehement by adding an !
on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:54 AM
Hey where's the will anyway?
on The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
11 Dec 2002, 11:16 AM
Other than you repugnant love for shit ( I think you must talk to
your shit while you poop or something either that or you've eaten shit. Tell me, how did it taste, Like pig meat?) Other than that, this is funny. No really the last line is not sarcastic.
your shit while you poop or something either that or you've eaten shit. Tell me, how did it taste, Like pig meat?) Other than that, this is funny. No really the last line is not sarcastic.
on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT
16 Oct 2002, 6:25 PM
The tambourine just doesn't scan well because I associate tambourines with women, other than that, I like it.
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Oct 2002, 6:59 PM
You are melodramatic, rhyme extremely well and like shit(e). What am I to do with you? Please read my Bum's rhyme, it was for you.
on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:53 AM
yes. :)
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Oct 2002, 8:12 AM
LOL! I come in after a brief spell and you blast me with this maggot(AIDs)infected poem. Your rhyming rocks! As much as I want to give this a zero for grave generalization on your part, I'll add a 1 before the zero.
on Twisted Dimension by DreamMachine
9 Oct 2002, 6:43 PM
I believe you mean, "....A whistle's blown..." and the spelling is 'faggot' in reference to the wood-related meaning of 'faggot'.
on The rendition 2 (at the wedding) by ~incarnate~
11 Dec 2002, 10:45 AM
Hey, is what the priest saying and what you're saying in some kind of pattern? The count is the same...
And what's the hayden suprise symphony doing there?
And what's the hayden suprise symphony doing there?