on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Oct 2002, 7:01 PM
And you definitely get a plus for talking 16th century-like. :D
on Child of my Buttocks by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
16 Oct 2002, 6:59 PM
You are melodramatic, rhyme extremely well and like shit(e). What am I to do with you? Please read my Bum's rhyme, it was for you.
on Bleeding V2 by INTRANSIT
16 Oct 2002, 6:25 PM
The tambourine just doesn't scan well because I associate tambourines with women, other than that, I like it.
on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
15 Oct 2002, 8:12 AM
LOL! I come in after a brief spell and you blast me with this maggot(AIDs)infected poem. Your rhyming rocks! As much as I want to give this a zero for grave generalization on your part, I'll add a 1 before the zero.
on Twisted Dimension by DreamMachine
9 Oct 2002, 6:43 PM
I believe you mean, "....A whistle's blown..." and the spelling is 'faggot' in reference to the wood-related meaning of 'faggot'.
on Why... by livingcanvas
7 Oct 2002, 8:02 AM
...haven't you posted new poetry?
on A call to arms by INTRANSIT
7 Oct 2002, 7:58 AM
Unexpectedly Nice, the tongue though seems well...
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
you tickle your feet with your hand and you toussle your tongue with a tongue.
replying on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
7 Oct 2002, 7:52 AM
Hi, I'm back. NO more catfights or I promise you a verbal duel.
on The Writing Life #2 by poetandknowit
27 Sep 2002, 2:05 PM
You must really enjoy being nasty to people, you are the reason I've deleted 10 of my poems from this site. I think I will just move my poems to poetry.com at least there I won't get insulted.
replying on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
23 Sep 2002, 7:36 AM
cool! What part are you from? The west,East, South or North?
on Intervention by livingcanvas
19 Sep 2002, 8:16 AM
I'm already forming a tune...:)