on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 6:06 PM
Hey are you really half African? tell me, tell me! Where did all your points go?
on angelic by deafmute2000
18 Sep 2002, 5:23 PM
Belittling and sweet at the same time. What usually makes me decrease marks is the wrong/non usage of apostrophe. E.g. you're not your and we're not were.
on Essential Love by unknown
18 Sep 2002, 5:20 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwww!
on Stifled by wordsphincter
18 Sep 2002, 1:24 PM
Hi Word. I think he/she is trying to create an image of eyes receiving and comprehending(grasping) the image of the courts. It's kinda like my use of the words abhor and accrue in my now deleted "Wandering thoughts".
on [Untitled] by Sirena_Feroz
18 Sep 2002, 1:16 PM
I don't get it. I think you are describing an un-wanted pregnancy. I guess you blame the man and hate the child<--- this of course was my overall impression.
on Black Buns by Bachus
18 Sep 2002, 1:11 PM
I guess everyone would have been less irritated if you didn't use the 'n' word, and maybe your so-called message would have been received.
on affirmative action by thelonefrobros
18 Sep 2002, 1:01 PM
Yuck!eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww. Green semen! eeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww.
on Why... by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:47 PM
Lol. Questions we all ask ourselves. This is thoughful.
on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:45 PM
One problem though, isn't it supposed to be "Grandma" in the title?
on spirit of a grama by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:45 PM
Marvelous. Jeez I need to improve.
on House of the Risen Son by livingcanvas
18 Sep 2002, 12:42 PM
Wow! your work is good. Please read my Hope poem and leave a comment. I liked this a lot. I never seem to find your name when I check the random poems though, then again I never see mine even when I'm not logged in yet.
on Bein' Vegan by poetandknowit
17 Sep 2002, 8:18 AM
I thought you said you chatted as fred but you were in fact Frass. How come bein'Vegan is here? hmmm...?
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
16 Sep 2002, 7:21 PM
Oh and guys he clearly states he has a wife.
on We visited the gay men on the veranda by Frass
16 Sep 2002, 7:20 PM
You guys are nuts! The poem is a simple description of your feelings around gay men and how you view them.
on while you are away on the islands by poetandknowit
11 Sep 2002, 5:47 PM
Hey Poetandknowit I hope you read this cause I think your comment was very insulting and uncalled for. If you don't have something nice to say or you do not have constructive corrections then keep your bloody opinions to yourself. Imbecile!
on A Dream Awakened by impaired
11 Sep 2002, 2:04 PM
I think in line 15, it should be"....in awe at the colors" not 'at'. The poem sounds Minstrel-like to me. I think the last line can be done without. Nice sensitivity. LOL at your comment Bacchus.
on st. valentine's day mascara by crin
11 Sep 2002, 1:29 PM
The naughty little violence in the bedroom seems to be getting a little too naughty.