on untitled (readjuster) by pomoxo
20 Jan 2003, 8:39 PM
I get the feeling there's more depth in this than I'm picking up on. Still, I like what I read.
on School. by cleverdevice
20 Jan 2003, 8:52 PM
Well I cringed when they caught his hand in the door. I thought it was a powerful poem.
on The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos
20 Jan 2003, 8:31 PM
Liked your second stanza but you lost me in the first - couldn't comprehend lines 4 through 9 and I thought the rhythm was a little stilted in this stanza.
on Dr. Skellington by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
20 Jan 2003, 8:35 PM
Clever.