Poemranker [20 most recent comments by corinacorrie and replies]

Comments bycorinacorrie, the 20 most recent, including replies. Only comments on poems

on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 11 Feb 2003, 1:56 PM

hmm... well we all have to start somewhere.

replying on 6:02 by corinacorrie 6 Feb 2003, 6:19 PM

um... thanks? care to expand? i just wrote this tonite- i just felt like putting it up here right away...

on I Had by Spindle 6 Feb 2003, 3:11 PM

Great poem! Maybe think about changing "and that's the end" since it doesn't need to rhyme, just a thought.

on missing time by Bill Z Bub 22 Jan 2003, 4:11 PM

I love it--- especially
"as she breathes/through chapped lips/so perfect."