on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER
6 Mar 2003, 12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
on I have nothing left to steal. by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:05 PM
That's good though. Still not tapping hidden ideas however, but damn fine work.
on first kiss by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:03 PM
it's okay, but hardly profound.
on Eros, and Psycho by horus8
21 Feb 2003, 9:05 PM
Why do you consistantly dwell upon your mother horus? Look at the people you attract to you by doing that. You can't fix Marrianne, let her go Grendal. just bring flowers when she breaks the ground as we all must do. then break wind.
on The Guardian, page nineteen by Nicholas Jones
4 Mar 2003, 5:49 PM
The laws of the universe states that to be quite normal Mr. Jones.
on who? by Crakyamuni
7 Mar 2003, 12:30 PM
lol.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 4:59 PM
That's funny i just read this out loud replacing the word "write" with rock, and i pissed myself splendid. no shit, i swear.
on some deleted poem
26 Feb 2003, 11:29 AM
Meatloaf has man tits.
on some deleted poem
26 Feb 2003, 10:39 AM
Yep. that's a fragment alright.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 4:57 PM
"Protray something deep." YESM ME TOO.LOL.YAAFR.
try replacing the word "write" for rock.
try replacing the word "write" for rock.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 4:54 PM
That made no sense. You want him to not forget you, but you want to forget him, am i to understand this correctly? better then your other one though, how the guitar or the biting air fits in one could only dare to guess if that process wasn't absolutely indistinguishable from not really giving a loaf (a nice way of saying sh_t!) i'm toning it down these days we wouldn't want anyone to accidentilly stab their ass out or say just kill themselves. God forbid jim jones could talk 800 stupid americans into killing themselves for no reason. Perhaps that's why american poetry sucks.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 4:47 PM
American poetry sucks.
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:08 PM
That's good shit. Haven't i read this somewhere? Glad i didn't put my foot in my mouth. You are a better poet, and i could learn from you. Thanks, you're right i am still a boy, but i'm growing fast. Great poem.
on some deleted poem
2 Mar 2003, 4:14 PM
I guess when da isn't a wheelchaired fag he's a heterosexual with a fine taste for 'the womem of the bangbus'? What a scholar, and an insightful provider of cutting edge pornography. Better watch your sugar levels sport! We wouldn't want you staining the litmus paper with your grasp on reality.
on Horus8 Vs. Book Learning by TanHand
21 Feb 2003, 9:00 PM
Ha! Ha! true true, but i do that with or without you or love, that dear is why i'm an artist revered by my peers as skilled in the art of scotch taping while proclaimimg myself the pyrgayte sunflower of the china seas. besides... some party's are just dying for rainbows like me to do a little dance, thanks for fueling the legend of (ding dong) fuck, pink dot... where was i, ah yes the legend of 'begger lance' the golfing dr. tickling, BITER OF EARLOBES! Gemstones when worn by a lady, should be real and peridot, not fake and plastic. A biting was called for by the supreme bringer of bites, i could not stop the order, and the week before you was another in venice when i threw my shoes in a tree with a painting lass of mine and then impaled my palm while fetching them back upon the bamboo, you are just the tail at the end of the beast called... 'thee belted beast of notchingham'..
on Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95
6 Mar 2003, 1:42 PM
Cauldron.
Within.
Blackened.
Within.
Blackened.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 6:26 PM
Jesus, I never knew you cared. Sorry.
on Mens Cocks Have No Style by spank me baby yeah
4 Mar 2003, 6:18 PM
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
on some deleted poem
4 Mar 2003, 5:58 PM
I'll tell him to choke on the deadsea scrolls. I'm a Mason not some self obsessing Catholic cry baby. I'll design him a new church and let him blow me 'tween the pews. We'll get drunk on the blood of hayzeus and eat his body, too. Bob? you are a lazy bad chef and a shame upon the vatican, i feel that much more delusional for having let you think you can't blink. poof*
on Homecomings by Nicholas Jones
4 Mar 2003, 5:52 PM
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.