poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Shardik (41-60) and replies

Comments byShardik, 41–60 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on Black Love by Faulk 7 Sep 2004, 8:58 PM
As ethnic as a turban at a cab stand.
on Two Basic Forces by dougsoderstrom 31 Aug 2004, 11:37 PM
Pure smut.
on Divide the Pride by ShivaDiva 31 Aug 2004, 3:27 PM
Odd.
replying on terra incognita by horus8 3 Aug 2004, 1:56 PM
Fuck you is two words too, isn't it sunshine?
replying on Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw 3 Aug 2004, 12:42 PM
I didn't know you were Greek, are you?

You know how many poems I'v had written
about how much cock and smack I suck? many,
you're not a full fledged member of poemranker until
you're gangraped.
replying on Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw 3 Aug 2004, 12:40 PM
little paranoid are we?
on Cassandra. by SupremeDreamer 3 Aug 2004, 12:09 PM
Good god, you still blowing the water pipe over there with carrie? Does not the buckets of blood slighly staunch the buzz?
on Wha wha guitar by wnot Dovinaw 3 Aug 2004, 12:07 PM
Bombastic...11!
I was once fell into the void, but lucky for me, I was just hallucinating, and it turned out to be my my face in my omellete and a clean nickle of spank.
"To High beak sky"

Sir, you are no beaker.
on Fear by Mona Lisa 25 Jul 2004, 8:58 PM
"I'm so fucking tired seeking Galilee,
Just want to help the sparrow"

Me too I want to save all the fucking sparrows.
then I want to funnel them at 4500 psi through some 1 inch pvc pipe at your moose knuckle you mop wristed satalite hussy.
on Virgin Bride by TwilightDawned 5 Jul 2004, 9:12 PM
Fecund maggotry of the lowest rung.
A freckled gnewt on Pcp.
on Stuffy by horus8 25 Jun 2004, 5:52 PM
"You're the salesman, you make sales."
on Rosalía de Castro: When I was born by Sasha 21 Jun 2004, 2:36 PM
Come spawn with me...
on Quiet, Kind Hills by Dovina 21 Jun 2004, 1:46 PM
This sounded like this porno parody of that movie the "Hours" I watched the other day, it was called the "Showers".
replying on A Strenuous Recollection by Doug 11 Jun 2004, 7:03 PM
You know a fleck?
Like flea doo.
on fire has its own logic by impert&ent 11 Jun 2004, 6:02 PM
humus
on The Gray Idea by Doug 11 Jun 2004, 6:01 PM
I never contested my well fluffed homosexuality,
and if anything it adds more perfume to when I
state your work as being a crackling homerun of shit
on The Gray Idea by Doug 11 Jun 2004, 3:32 PM
A shitaco with extra snips of shredded ass.