poemranker ::20 most recent comments by Shardik (21-40) and replies

Comments byShardik, 21–40 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on For Beth, after anal intercourse by zodiac 11 Oct 2004, 3:17 PM
I'm a pinched hitter.
on One True Instant by Dovina 11 Oct 2004, 3:00 PM
I loved the beginning, by the end though? I was like good christ. Women are so fucking co-dependant, blah.
replying on One True Instant by Dovina 11 Oct 2004, 2:57 PM
Dude, you are fucking too cool. You crack me up like no other, love it.
on A Reflective Window by lukehanney 9 Oct 2004, 4:40 PM
"God is dead, and no one cares... If there is a hell, I'll see you there".
Two in the niche
One in the pinch
on Goodbye by TLRufener 26 Sep 2004, 6:32 PM
Perhaps they drip because of GRAVITY?
on A Beggar Speaks by WondrousMoment 26 Sep 2004, 5:41 PM
A hobo mutes
on why there are no virgins by daggatolar 26 Sep 2004, 4:27 PM
Wet cocaINE
on Corner of 30th and Tibbs by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:36 AM
Da Lint
on Inquietude by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:35 AM
Smoking
on Penumbra by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:33 AM
Maryland
on Eagledale Drive by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:33 AM
From
on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:32 AM
Plumber
on Disregardance by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:31 AM
Another
on Coldfront by klosterfobik 15 Sep 2004, 11:30 AM
Just
on New Year by emilyowey 7 Sep 2004, 9:46 PM
A crouton in a maelstrom.
on Beneath The Undertow by longships 7 Sep 2004, 9:18 PM
If you think that beginning each of your tawdry blasphemous stanzas with the ACE line "beneath the undertow" makes this poem anymore tolerable, you're right! Asshat. Let's do it for the planet guys!!! What the fuck?!
on Disregardance by klosterfobik 7 Sep 2004, 9:09 PM
'taint bad, but 'taint begging for a publishing neither.
on Delicate Was by klosterfobik 7 Sep 2004, 9:06 PM
I once buggered an otter named Luke.
on Love Lie's In Misery by Brandy_n_Cali 7 Sep 2004, 9:00 PM
A pickle in a skirt.