replying on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Mar 2003, 3:14 PM
How about your face? That would make a splendid metaphor, better then your acting.
replying on Hecate, and the high hunt by <{Baba^Yaga}>
9 Mar 2003, 3:12 PM
Hey, LeBlanc. Go fuckyourself. Your poetry fucking sucks idiot. guess what? Go fuck your teachers too, they did a hoorible job, and also your priest? A fag, yes, a fag, so go fuck yourself, dickchin. I don't like christians, jews, or especially french prolife twits.You must be here for poetry... Because you don't have any.
on Para Sa Aking Sinta by NewbieMe
7 Mar 2003, 2:17 PM
"Tanging taglay ay pag-asa" likewise i'm sure.
replying on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
7 Mar 2003, 2:09 PM
ohh..spin it.?
replying on Keanu Vs The mystery of life by Shardik
7 Mar 2003, 2:07 PM
i was being funny, but give me an example.
on who? by Crakyamuni
7 Mar 2003, 12:30 PM
lol.
replying on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos
7 Mar 2003, 12:18 PM
You might be better then me on a certain poetic level. But I have a hungry mind and all the time in the world. If you gave this a four though i would rather you remove your vote. Simply because this piece is better then a 4 and we both know it. Plus, it's very personal to me, and i would consider that a favor. Otherwise, we have nothing more to discussw
on i will not come to bangladesh by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:08 PM
That's good shit. Haven't i read this somewhere? Glad i didn't put my foot in my mouth. You are a better poet, and i could learn from you. Thanks, you're right i am still a boy, but i'm growing fast. Great poem.
on I have nothing left to steal. by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:05 PM
That's good though. Still not tapping hidden ideas however, but damn fine work.
on first kiss by lost in america
7 Mar 2003, 12:03 PM
it's okay, but hardly profound.
replying on Something for Lynn by Jeremi B. Handrinos
7 Mar 2003, 12:02 PM
Oh old one pray tell what we should do different to shake the youthfull energy that we set out for in this piece, and obviously achieved. How would you edit this then? What was young about it other then it being from the perspective of a 4 year old? What does young mean to you? I hope you're not elderly with alzheimers and lost in an rv? I have been writing poetry on a better level then you, and quite longer then you assume, i assure you. Don't jump to conclusions you can't back up with physical work. I will take a look at your work first though, before i stick your head in my mouth. Let's take a look? shall we?
replying on Love spank by Shardik
7 Mar 2003, 11:41 AM
Yes, but I found that out after getting a couple of high hits Mr. Foster, and was like "Who cares ? (having momentarilly forgotten your insistant scholastic hang ups and scoutings ahead)." It adds a LAYER of normal human error that I rather enjoy sir, called the perfection in being imperfectly aware, always. A permenant mushroom trip. An inbetween world, between the genders, the words, the cities, the atmospere and space. the water on the shore. the constant change from right and wrong to night and day. With a shell at my ear I heard birth dying to live again. Somewhere else.
replying on Aries, the God of war by Shardik
6 Mar 2003, 3:23 PM
Ram horns crash, hoving
Whet stones sharply grind, census
Mars in retrograde.
Whet stones sharply grind, census
Mars in retrograde.
on Blackened Cauldron by Ellie95
6 Mar 2003, 1:42 PM
Cauldron.
Within.
Blackened.
Within.
Blackened.
replying on Aries, the God of war by Shardik
6 Mar 2003, 1:36 PM
How about now?
on First Confirmation by babyBOOMER
6 Mar 2003, 12:22 PM
Gripping and punctually perfect.
on Mens Cocks Have No Style by spank me baby yeah
4 Mar 2003, 6:18 PM
No problem, but I have a beautifull cock, so I guess your argument is with God tit-teeth, and i'm sure there are a lot of other men who are willing to step forward here and proclaim that they too have pretty puds, stud monkey was it? yes i think it was. Also; i know woman that will come forward with the truth. That they also have eye friendly floggers, my friend soooooooo that said. YOU just got the short end of the stick, friend, buddy, pal, aquaintance, surrogate toothpaste unfolder, visor flipper, pool cleaner.
on Homecomings by Nicholas Jones
4 Mar 2003, 5:52 PM
The top five lines are redundant. The rest a hell of a meal. Simple, and pleasantly sinister.
on The Guardian, page nineteen by Nicholas Jones
4 Mar 2003, 5:49 PM
The laws of the universe states that to be quite normal Mr. Jones.