on Angel by abecedarian
7 Aug 2003, 1:45 AM
Wierd, First that the poem right next to this is also entitled Angel, I wonder how often that kinda thing happens and second sex with an angel. I'm sorry I know there are lots of pictures of female angels and things but have you ever read about one in any religious doctrine? I haven't. Just wierd kiddo. Beautiful Imagery and well written in my opinion. Also wrong by those standards but whatever. -9-.
on American Eden by Don-Quixote
3 Aug 2003, 11:59 PM
Hmmm.. A bit long, the ending was great, try it this way. Lose the ghost stanza, and I think the poet stanza doesn't really fit. Other that I see potential. Both to make something very artistic and to fuck it up. Have fun.
on The difference between the two -=Dark_Angel=-'s by horus8
3 Aug 2003, 3:18 PM
Very True Indeed. -10-
on HANDRINOS IS A HUMOURLESS PRIG by walrus8
3 Aug 2003, 3:21 PM
Like to argue much?
on A Student in Descent by EAger to Offend
23 Jul 2003, 6:54 PM
You little rascal. That might explain alot. -10-
on DJ Bling Bling spins authenticity by Jeremi B. Handrinos
30 Jul 2003, 12:21 AM
LOL.
What an Ironing Board.
10.
What an Ironing Board.
10.
on Too obvious by INTRANSIT
29 Jul 2003, 9:21 PM
Acme.. The plague of teenage youth, that apparently never entirely goes away... 10.
on After seven days in the sun by <~>
29 Jul 2003, 9:29 AM
Very, Very, Well Done. This Poem Took some Talent. -10-
on Broken Hearted by thepinkbunnyofdooom
28 Jul 2003, 11:32 PM
LOL. Thanks, You just have a way of making me smile. A 10 just because you spend so much time, investigating my life.
on Ideology for a new era by walrus8
28 Jul 2003, 11:37 PM
Whats sad is if it wasn't you that wrote this, I'd say I see the poetic meaning here. -8-.
on some deleted poem
28 Jul 2003, 11:43 PM
A classic story, to be told to generations of youth here to come to better inspire them toward decent, proper, party behavior. -9-
on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
26 Jul 2003, 11:30 AM
Awe.. Look at me. I'm so cute, between bars.
on Birth in the Valley of Liquor by horus8
26 Jul 2003, 12:14 PM
Wow. How long ago did you write this? Very well written. -10-
on Upon a falling bar stool (Free for all) by PluckyHoe by horus8
25 Jul 2003, 7:26 AM
LMMFAOROFL!!!
Worth a -10-
or a young virgin sex slave from black markets of China. The -10- was easier to gift wrap so here.
Worth a -10-
or a young virgin sex slave from black markets of China. The -10- was easier to gift wrap so here.
on some deleted poem
25 Jul 2003, 7:41 AM
Fo Risso My Nisso.
Don't change a word. Not One.
Just a nifty little fact I learned awhile ago, but did you know that when they build a white castle, the surrounding property value goes down?
-10-
Don't change a word. Not One.
Just a nifty little fact I learned awhile ago, but did you know that when they build a white castle, the surrounding property value goes down?
-10-
on You are a divider by Bachus
23 Jul 2003, 7:48 PM
Something tells me your either pining or lamenting love. Call me crazy, but this doesn't whack me on the head and cause a shitload of thought, and yet I think its very touching. -10-
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
23 Jul 2003, 7:11 PM
Horus, there are very few poems you have ever written that haven't amused me to the point of tears. The idea of you walking door to door selling Avon, is one I couldn't bare. Have a -10- and find yourself some kill. Look on the bright side, free Skin Care!!
on Feasting Ouroboros by <~>
23 Jul 2003, 6:59 PM
Just wondering what does Ouroboros mean? Other than that nice start.
on Poemranker's Recent Infestation of Teenage Girls by 68.75.19.117
25 Jul 2003, 7:30 AM
Hehe, thats the truth.