on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
29 Jan 2003, 5:20 PM
Wow were screwed up fairy tale you got there but i liked it till i got to the captain part but it got good again with the wolf so here is a great big Eight
on The poemranker desk by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 4:16 PM
I know its probably just one of those random things seeing as to how this was here before i even joined poemranker but your first "dootle" looks like a bunny and this is just so cool so 10
on me, Deep-as-a-puddle and the elusive connection by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 4:27 PM
your a Mondern Day Confusus
on Xmas gifts list by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 4:30 PM
original. strange but original. bsed soley on that a ten.
on some deleted poem
29 Jan 2003, 4:38 PM
Its nice now i can't wait to see the end product
on The lyric of the cabbage by Dostoyevsky
29 Jan 2003, 1:32 PM
Ok a Poem about vegatables that mentions Dr. Lector? Just for mentioning the last name of Hannibal you Would get a ten by me but still, Cabbage? Hows an 8 sound.
on some deleted poem
29 Jan 2003, 1:35 PM
Wow, I wish i Liked my dad that much. Almost sounds a little homo the broken heart. still its good work and a ten by me.
on Perversions 3: Payback by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:09 PM
You said i was like charles manson? Like you have room to talk. your creepy. But oddly enough i find this poem so funny i gave it a ten. now i need to go gouge me eyes out for reading this.
on Perversions by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:20 PM
not as funny as 3. might it be possibble to get you to write a 4th? these are just too interesting.
on perversions 2: the revenge by razorgrin
29 Jan 2003, 2:24 PM
Eww... Sick but not as good as the others this get a 7. It might have been more if i had any clue as to what scat was.
on Cant sleep, clown will eat me.(A poem about clowns) by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 2:41 PM
Nice title. I felt like that too(although never on a horse).
on Random thoughts poem-do not try to find a meaning for there are too many. by lunar
29 Jan 2003, 2:51 PM
such depth i wouldn't even dare to try and phathom the the meaning but some how it sings to my soul. Execellent poem.
on Breaking Away by wickedemon4
29 Jan 2003, 3:15 PM
Great feeling behind your words but you got a little abstract toward the end. Kin would also sound cooler if you replaced it with breathern <- (Probably mispelled that but who cares). I give it a nine.
on Minoan lover by Jeremi B. Handrinos
27 Jan 2003, 5:37 PM
Not Bad for a chode but It seems a little repetive i gave it a six
on some deleted poem
27 Jan 2003, 7:01 PM
Yikes you got alot of anger packed into those 15 lines there. its sweet dude perfect ten.
on some deleted poem
27 Jan 2003, 7:07 PM
Hey don't let these other guys get you down. I like it. Its simple but honest.
on some deleted poem
29 Jan 2003, 2:01 PM
nicest words razorgrin has ever wrote but he is right. this is a kick ass poem
P.S. Add the words "in Bed" to all your fortunes cookie sayings and they take on a whole new meaning.