poemranker ::20 most recent comments by thepinkbunnyofdoom (721-740) and replies

Comments bythepinkbunnyofdoom, 721–740 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on From Don ... For Me by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:37 AM
Too incomplete. Expand on what your saying.
on REALITY by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:34 AM
Needs more content but this would be a LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE if I hadn't all ready given you one today. Trust me girlfriends come and go but the poems you write about them will haunt us forever. -8-
on At A Loss by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:30 AM
Been there it sux.
LIFE GETS BETTER AWARDE -10-
on Senses I Have by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:28 AM
Truth be told we only see what we want to see
Tounges lie with ease
Your ears are like our eyes
If you gave your heart fully then when it broke you'd die

Still to be fair not a bad poem -6-
on ALONE by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:19 AM
Nice subject matter and I like the way you question yourself. I really think that you worked to hard to confine your thoughts to your 4 line stanza. Let those thoughts run free.
on Goodbye Daddy by NewbieMe 22 Feb 2003, 9:14 AM
Hmmm... I like the way this sorta moves you but the language seems just a little forced. -8-
replying on My Poor Heart by NewbieMe 21 Feb 2003, 5:03 PM
Hey don't worry about it. Just giving you some insight for next time.Trust me we all start out sucky but the goal is to get better. ;)
on My Poor Heart by NewbieMe 21 Feb 2003, 2:21 PM
Dull kiddo. Try a whole new aproach to your writing style. You need some depth.
replying on Hidden Meaning by thepinkbunnyofdoom 20 Feb 2003, 4:20 PM
What? Like the title says the meaning is hidden. Its not really about a city.
on Perversions 5: Kink vs. Mothra by razorgrin 19 Feb 2003, 3:06 PM
LMAO.
on Perversions 6: Judgement Day by razorgrin 19 Feb 2003, 3:05 PM
Smiley I Love You. These perversions always brighten my day. They're funny as usual.
on Sharks For Libido by scitz 17 Feb 2003, 11:07 AM
Okay don't look it up. Whatever flips your pancake.
on Small Teeth in a Glass Bowl by Fear of Garbage 17 Feb 2003, 7:40 AM
Nice Indeed.
on Atonement by aperfecttool77 17 Feb 2003, 7:33 AM
Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.
replying on Sharks For Libido by scitz 16 Feb 2003, 6:41 PM
Yes well I rather enjoy being happy but thats probably not the definition your using. Hers's one for you D.A. Look up impotent. You should recognise your ugly mug right with the caption "can't get his winkie up".
:)
replying on help me understand by nolan 16 Feb 2003, 10:45 AM
Ouch that comment actually gave me a headache
on My Mind by Deb_djb3113 16 Feb 2003, 10:43 AM
I feel like I've read this before
on Sharks For Libido by scitz 16 Feb 2003, 10:41 AM
According to dictionary.com you misspelled your second word in line 2.
on Highlights From a Conversation at the Laundromat by bunniesnangels 15 Feb 2003, 5:23 PM
I love that last line.
on nightly by <~> 10 Feb 2003, 1:34 PM
Thats how I live.