poemranker ::20 most recent comments by GekoHawaii

Comments byGekoHawaii, the 20 most recent. Include replies

on All Alone Again by Spindle 7 Feb 2003, 6:28 AM
Overall nice job. It just needs a little tweaking in the words to help it flow a little better.
on mirror by famenglory 23 Mar 2003, 6:20 PM
Wow...very powerful
on Leave by Luv2write 21 Apr 2003, 7:05 PM
Again a nice twist...though it does get a little repetitive before you get there...
on ForMyFriend, Joneel by Luv2write 21 Apr 2003, 7:13 PM
Jomegan?...

The meter needs a little work...but the idea and rhyme are good.
on Lost by Luv2write 21 Apr 2003, 7:17 PM
This is one of your best poems that I have seen. It definitely gets my approval. Nice job.
on Life by Luv2write 21 Apr 2003, 7:10 PM
I've seen you do better. I know this has a deeper message but you could have written it a little differently to portray it in a way that would have been more powerful. My advice is to keep the good idea and try again in a different style.
on Tears Falling by loneshadow29 19 Apr 2003, 7:17 AM
Nice job with an overdone subject. You added something different to it..just what I can't put my finger on, but I like it.
on Salt Water by OneFingerAnswer 19 Apr 2003, 7:22 AM
Overall an amazing poem, but just felt like silly didn't really fit in though. Maybe you could look for a different adjective. Since in the whole dark and wise tone of the whole poem, silly is a little naive and childish.
on At Least I Love You by Luv2write 23 Mar 2003, 6:26 PM
Thanks for the inspiring words. I have friends that tell me then same, though I still don't believe it.
on My friend by Luv2write 23 Mar 2003, 6:30 PM
Oo...Nice twist, good rhyme scheme, overall good poetry. The meter needs a little work but that is something that can be easily fixed.
on Rain by famenglory 23 Mar 2003, 6:17 PM
So...ju wanna sleep wid da fishies...I tink we can arrange dat...
on Waiting by Luv2write 23 Mar 2003, 6:33 PM
mmm...yet again a great unseen twist. I like your style. It's out of the ordinary which is always a good thing. Great poem, but again there were a few minor meter difficulties that can be fixed fairly easily.
on Live by Luv2write 23 Mar 2003, 6:39 PM
Hm...wow. As you can see religion is a touchy subject. Something that anyone and everyone is willing to argue with, since no two people have the same exact beliefs. Cheers to you for hitting such a controversial subject on a public site.
on amanda by famenglory 27 Jan 2003, 9:03 PM
It's my goal to be able to write like you. I think I'll send this to my ex amanda.
on alms by famenglory 27 Jan 2003, 9:10 PM
Wow. Again I'm impressed. Very deep and true. Like in a higher level hippy spiritual kind of way.