on Paper Bag Scenario by dragonfly
7 Nov 2003, 3:45 PM
"Rave" reviews here. The curse of trying to find intelligent life on this planet. Solitude is far less troublesome but no more friendly at times.
replying on All Alone In A Selfish Moment by ARTIE
24 Oct 2003, 3:12 PM
Crude, my dear 'oet. Throat fucking is a pleasure, incest with MY sister is unthinkable.
on verruca by ?-Dave_Mysterious-?
24 Oct 2003, 2:53 PM
"Cherish" doesn't work.e with the "eh" suff-ends of the first two lines. How about "Warts ne'er Dimish."?
A personal exercision and cauterization is in order. You may cherish that moment.
A personal exercision and cauterization is in order. You may cherish that moment.
replying on First Time In A Long Time by EAger to Offend
24 Oct 2003, 2:40 PM
Savory Display. Now I have a craving for BBQ. Smells like the work of a bovie wafting through an OR hallway.
on Three Fall by <~>
24 Oct 2003, 1:15 PM
It chills the warm cockles of my forgotten admonition to stay out of the water. Good vote though.
on Breasts by Stephen Robins
24 Oct 2003, 1:05 PM
Dr. Fuhrmenbresten says, "If you've seen one...you've likely seen 'em both." Not sure the reference to pubic hair fits in the grand scheme of breasts, but, I like the last two lines. 9
on My Guardian Angel by ramtheman1
18 Oct 2003, 9:43 AM
I lost my best friend ever - my wife. I often want to look back, but know - that to exist, I must not turn my gaze. The voice is in front, looking back at me.
Good job.
Good job.
on Torment by ThoughtfulSoul
18 Oct 2003, 9:21 AM
The voices in my head (I too am not alone) often tell me to jump - which I do, straight up - until I realize that gravity is not my friend. I find myself falling right back in, my sudden grip lost. My torment. Nice.
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
18 Oct 2003, 8:48 AM
Oooops! My apologies sir! I obviously hit the wrong key.r
However, I enjoy a good spanking from time to time. I think I'll hold out for the quail though.
However, I enjoy a good spanking from time to time. I think I'll hold out for the quail though.
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 10:43 PM
Jizzed a minnet Ms. Silver, does this mean you won't be going to the spa for a facial anytime soon? "Sick" you ask? "No respect" you ask? I'd respect you more if you didn't use a hanky. Remember what the Colonel said?
Was "the light at the end of the tunnel" a bullet firing? Such cowardice. I liked the last stanza best, the third one leaves me wondering if you just need to get out with your consoling friends - eat some weasel, tastes like wabbit. Nicole's a bitch - get over her - get on with it. Emotional otherwise.
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 7:51 PM
I'd prefer a Dove - a pleasurable antitheses - although I could set it afire and bring out the laces and whips - no sticks - too medieval at this point. Dave needs a "hall pass".
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 6:52 PM
To each his own those lonely nights when dusk-to-dusk becomes too slow, for Lucifer, the light. ("Seven Screaming Diz-Busters")
BOC
BOC
replying on Facial Bliss by ARTIE
17 Oct 2003, 6:29 PM
You don't get out often, do you? Living a sedentary life hanging out in a deli will not bring you this happiness unless you convince the Starbucks waitress to follow you home and deliver the groceries. Nice Haiku though.
on The Nude by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
10 Oct 2003, 7:34 PM
One has only to read [most of] the string of comments above to realize that DA's third verse is the genius that confused, then offended and then inspired all of you to quickly "pull your open blouses closed" thereby revealing your own prudish personal brawl, the subliminal "clothing" that protects the spew of your ment. DA mocked - and won. That ot to be wth a tn.
on Santa Ana, California by bondjedi
24 Jul 2002, 9:58 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery! "10"
Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
Geeeez! Can one ever receive valid critique in this venue?
on summer by itchiwitch
24 Jul 2002, 9:56 PM
Good Haiku! Great imagery. Geeeeez! Can someone just submit a reasonable criticism once in a while in this venue? "10"
on Eclipse 99 by hlatkins
24 Jul 2002, 9:53 PM
I could see where I was going, until I decided instead...to go to bed. But, I like it.