poemranker ::20 most recent comments by ARTIE (61-80) and replies

Comments byARTIE, 61–80 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

on The Poison by TheTiredTyrant 22 Jul 2002, 5:07 PM
Oh straightened back,
on slab of stone,
so tense, no slack,
you're not alone!
on Existence; Part 1 by ARTIE 22 Jul 2002, 4:49 PM
Speak!
on The Mirror Man by Mister Cakes 22 Jul 2002, 4:47 PM
A paradox, or utter paranoia? Stop looking there!
on Small and Simple by venusdemilo 22 Jul 2002, 3:28 PM
The breakup of a Relationship; A study of Sociologic pathology.
(Sociology 101)
We all "stumbles" through this.
on Wondering Eyes by Holden 22 Jul 2002, 3:24 PM
Whether to "Wander" or "Wonder", Will Angels set you free?
Coexistence herein, is truly the key.
on Stranger by mytenderrage 22 Jul 2002, 3:17 PM
Let us go for a walk, past the cemetary of time. You'll awaken.
on Craving by mytenderrage 22 Jul 2002, 3:14 PM
We all crave love, or the chance to bake muffins. Anyone who needs to see a shrink, needs to have their head examined! I like it.
on Suffocating by mytenderrage 22 Jul 2002, 3:10 PM
There is help available. Vallium, Darvocet, any narcotic will suffice. Take two, breathe deeply, and call me in the morning. The doctor is "In".
on The Eyestroke by seebergerb 22 Jul 2002, 2:58 PM
2nd stanza says it all for humanity! It reminds me of another poem. See my letter to time.
on The Sea by venusdemilo 22 Jul 2002, 2:56 PM
Existentalism in its simplicity. Taoism struggles within this!
on HERE TO THERE by ARTIE 22 Jul 2002, 2:02 PM
That "mushroom trip", as psylycybic(?) as it was, may as well have been 12 years of marriage...as the story was told. Love is often unfortunate!
on Why we're here by ARTIE 18 Jul 2002, 9:46 AM
Ah..., but for the chance, a muffin to bake, I realize now, my haiku mistake!
Can I borrow a spatula?
on Death and the Non-Scanning Poem by tooniron 18 Jul 2002, 7:21 AM
I like it, but, after the first three lines I was struggling with the flow. The only good cat, is a dead cat!
on Ethnic Smells by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 17 Jul 2002, 6:21 PM
Hmmmmm! This smells of....not the F.B.I., but of why?
on Clit by unknown 17 Jul 2002, 5:51 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, if your "maximum grid in Paintshop Pro" is blocking your view, how can you even comment on the last line? Go for it Razorgrin, dive in and seek.
on The End! by ARTIE 15 Jul 2002, 5:07 PM
Oh my Dog! There is cleverness in your tone! Very well....
on THE DEFENSE RESTS by horus8 15 Jul 2002, 4:59 PM
Geeeeeez! What are you in for?
on The End! by ARTIE 15 Jul 2002, 4:36 PM
Oh...Dark Angel, you amaze me. I really thought you had moved beyond fisting, it's so passe anymore. Oh my DOG! What have I done?
on Your Smile by ARTIE 15 Jul 2002, 4:23 PM
Oh, Dark Angel, what have you done?
You couldn't see the need for a smaller glass? You can dish it, but you cannot take it. In my irreverant dyslexia, "Oh my Dog! What have I done?" Ask horus8 for a Zanex, it'll all be well.
on Your Smile by ARTIE 15 Jul 2002, 2:10 PM
Sorry, but the real answer is: You, need a smaller glass!