on The Cereal Killer Blues by <{Baba^Yaga}>
11 Aug 2003, 4:40 AM
I used to have a Fiat but it broke down on me more times than my ex
on He Looks Great In Lycra by GAY AS FU*K
7 Aug 2003, 6:08 AM
You have a talent for sucking at many things.
But it did make me laugh and spit my Coke on to the screen.
But it did make me laugh and spit my Coke on to the screen.
on Can you believe this piece of shit was #1? by horus8
30 Jul 2003, 6:52 AM
funny
on I'll be your Gimp by GAY AS FU*K
2 Jul 2003, 1:42 PM
I am sure your poems suck better than you do.
on The Gecko, and the Italian book collector by horus8
2 Jul 2003, 1:38 PM
Goodness me there seems to be a real homo theme going on tonight. This however (unlike our camp friend Gay As Fuck) is a more solid, fluid work. 8
on I wanna convert him by GAY AS FU*K
2 Jul 2003, 1:37 PM
Your so not gay, who are you really?
I know lots of gay men and I think your possibly in awe of them, married with no excitement maybe in your bedroom. (its quite funny though)
I know lots of gay men and I think your possibly in awe of them, married with no excitement maybe in your bedroom. (its quite funny though)
on Orbiting Venus by scitz
2 Jul 2003, 1:35 PM
Some choice lines in here and you avoid smut and instead employ decorum in your expression.
Its very good and i see you have paid homage to us ladies. 9
Its very good and i see you have paid homage to us ladies. 9
on Watching My Childhood Vanish by Caducus
1 Jul 2003, 4:36 AM
Impressive ! moving yet quite funny in parts.
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus
13 Jun 2003, 6:54 AM
oops 8
on Lake Pyramid's Secret by Bachus
13 Jun 2003, 6:54 AM
I was rarely in class but I have stormed out of auditions once or twice. 7
on Dirge by Nicholas Jones
13 Jun 2003, 6:21 AM
Nice enough but the punch you packed was short of winding me 7
on How I fuck Freud off in the shower by horus8
13 Jun 2003, 3:56 AM
Disgustingly enjoyable and witty. I will give you an 8 if you promise to seek therapy over these golden showers.
on A Moment In Nowhere by Mr Pig
5 Jun 2003, 7:59 AM
Teach me Mr Pig this is beautiful and I am beginning to think you must be a lady for you are in touch with the femimine aura.
Ten
Ten
on A Summers Day In Stolen Eden by Mr Pig
27 May 2003, 3:36 PM
Wonderful !
A myriad of images which you have condensed more so than the others. This reminds me of a Frost poem I read
A myriad of images which you have condensed more so than the others. This reminds me of a Frost poem I read
on Love by simone_girard
20 May 2003, 11:32 AM
reading this made me feel like I've eaten to many sweets. Far too immature and full of cliches, sorry its pants.
on The Order Of Things by Mr Pig
20 May 2003, 11:29 AM
Beautifuly written, the attention to detail is astounding and I loved the message here and I think we miss it in our everyday lives, I love the way you write, are you married?
on may 18 by Bill Z Bub
20 May 2003, 11:23 AM
Bar a few there is some fine poems on the current entries today, this is no exception and the delivery of each line has a message and I loved it.
But do punks really sneer?
But do punks really sneer?